This week for the #writespiration 52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 22 Sacha Black has changed the rules!
Now because she has just released her brilliant new book 13 Steps to Evil, she has set us the task in the form of a competition with real prizes. Rules for the competition here. Now because the completion is going to run for 4weeks the word count is to be 208.
The aim is to write about the most evil villain 208 words no more no less.
This is my entry, it is a reworking of one of my earlier poems. I think it portrays a very evil villain. So here shortened to 208 words is.
Hello little Darling.
Hello little darling,you’ve lovely eyes.
You look pretty standing there, not yet worldly wise.
Little darling come and join our dance.
Sit with me darling in my plush new car
I’ll buy you shoes and dresses Oh! how lucky you are
Just a little make up darling when the men see you, you’ll be the one they choose.
Be nice to them my darling give them what they crave.
Don’t upset me darling that’s no way to behave.
Come on little darling give me your arm
It’s just a little something, it will do no harm.
Men pay me lots of money, to give you a fuck.
Your so young and pretty, and do anything I ask, what a piece of luck.
What is that little darling, you have had enough?
You’ll do what I tell you. It hurts? Tough.
Now don’t get awkward darling you’ll make me knock you about
A slap, a punch, a kick, will sort you out.
You want some more of the needle to get you through the night
Your lucky I am so good to you , get on your knees and beg, right!
Now lets see little darling you are looking rather jaded
Punters don’t want you, your charms are faded.