#writespiration # 118  52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 22 : Villains

This week for the #writespiration  52 Weeks in 52 Words Week 22 Sacha Black has changed the rules!

Now because she has just released her brilliant new book 13 Steps to Evil, she has set us the task in the form of a competition with real prizes. Rules for the competition here. Now because the completion is going to run for 4weeks the word count is to be 208.

The aim is to write about the most evil villain 208 words no more no less.

This is  my entry, it is a reworking of one of my earlier poems. I think it portrays a very evil villain. So here shortened to 208 words is.

Hello little Darling.

Hello little darling,you’ve lovely eyes.

You look  pretty standing  there, not yet worldly wise.

Little darling  come and join our dance.

Sit with me darling  in my plush new car

I’ll buy you shoes  and dresses Oh!  how lucky you are

Just a little make up  darling  when the men see you, you’ll be the one they choose.

Be nice to them my darling  give them what they crave.

Don’t upset me darling that’s  no way to behave.

Come on  little darling  give me  your arm

It’s just a little something​, it will do no harm.

Men pay me lots of money, to give you a fuck.

Your​ so young  and pretty, and do anything I ask, what a piece of luck.

What  is  that little  darling, you have had enough?

You’ll do what I tell you. It hurts? Tough.

Now don’t get awkward  darling you’ll make me knock you about

A slap, a punch, a kick, will sort you out.

You want some more of the needle  to get you through the night

Your lucky I am so good to you , get on your knees and beg, right!

Now lets see little darling  you are looking rather jaded

Punters don’t want you, your charms are faded.


16 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Jun 01, 2017 @ 22:08:47

    Now that is a true villain….


  2. Judy E Martin
    Jun 02, 2017 @ 02:59:05

    Very chilling Sis. This is indeed the worse kind of villain!


  3. noelleg44
    Jun 02, 2017 @ 12:49:59

    That’s a villain with real punch, Willow. EVIL.


  4. Hugh's Views and News
    Jun 02, 2017 @ 14:21:42

    Pure evil. You make me want to end his life and not worry about the consequences.


  5. Sacha Black
    Jun 07, 2017 @ 13:56:43

    That truly is an evil villain *shudder* – don’t forget to email me the entry 🙂


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