This is my entry for Sue Vincent of Daily Echo’s #writephoto prompt.
You have to use the image below to create a post on your own blog… poetry, prose, humour… light or dark, whatever you choose, by noon (GMT) Wednesday 3rd May and link back to Sue’s post here with a pingback. Please make sure that the pingback works and if not, copy and paste your link into the comments section of that post.
The Obelisk
It was a clear evening and the last rays of the sun where dancing on the water. The cliff and the old Obelisk were already in the shadows. Rachel approached with caution incase there were others there.
Standing by the Obelisk Rachel howled at the rising moon. Her pain growing inside her. She wondered if she should end her life, was there any point in going on.
She raised her head and sent out a plea.
Under the moon and Obelisk
I stand and beg you to find me
I have not seen you since our tryst
I need you to save me set me free
What hope have I our child dead
I carried our only hope
Alone I stand here in dread
I am tired, I can not cope.
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Rachel curled up and wept, she fell asleep. Far away, further up the coast Lisa heard Rachel’s plea, she prayed the old ones of the Obelisk would protect her friend until the dawn. Nestled in her arms Hope smiled.
Even further away Mathew stopped feeding on a deer and listened to the wind. Something indistinct told him Rachel needed him.
Previous episodes can be found
May 06, 2017 @ 10:23:54
So touching sis xxx
May 06, 2017 @ 10:47:17
Thanks Sis, I am running round in circles to catch up this week 💜💝
May 06, 2017 @ 10:49:28
Bless you xxx 💗💗💗
May 06, 2017 @ 11:43:59
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May 06, 2017 @ 12:07:19
A moving epsode, Willow ❤
May 06, 2017 @ 12:09:15
I feel for Rachel, in fact I feel for them all , thank you for reading Sue xxxx
May 06, 2017 @ 12:30:51
I think we all do, following their story xx
May 06, 2017 @ 12:36:32
Thanks Sue, and thanks for chance with the Fabulous prompts 🤗
May 06, 2017 @ 15:31:51
I think I am the lucky one getting so many wonderful tales and poems to read and share 🙂
May 06, 2017 @ 16:47:11
Well we all win then !! 🤗💝
May 06, 2017 @ 17:58:28
🙂
May 06, 2017 @ 15:26:05
Reblogged this on Sue Vincent's Daily Echo.
May 06, 2017 @ 16:50:08
Thank you Sue 💟
May 06, 2017 @ 15:30:50
Is this obelisk the one that sits on the edge of Portland Bill?
May 06, 2017 @ 16:49:41
Sue Vincent at https://scvincent.com/ sets the photos she knows where they all are , do ask her 💜
May 06, 2017 @ 17:04:01
Very, very nice, Willow!
May 06, 2017 @ 17:27:02
Thank you so much 💝💟💖💜
May 07, 2017 @ 14:04:05
I hope Matthew manages to find her, as she needs himm so badly! Well done for another wonnderful installment. Sis xx
May 07, 2017 @ 15:31:56
Thanks Sis, I hope he finds her too!
May 07, 2017 @ 18:30:27
I like how the obelisk seems to send her message outward and others far away sense it. Lovely plea. 🙂
May 07, 2017 @ 18:43:56
Thanks, let’s hope that those who hear her pleas answer her soon!! 💖
May 11, 2017 @ 08:14:33
Thanks Sue