Stream of Consciousness Saturday . Loss. A Nonet.

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It hurts like a razor cutting deep
Through my broken heart and lost soul.
So loved boy not mine to keep
Pain devowers  me whole.
Those words said in haste
Will forever
My love waste
I hate
It.
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LindaGHill said : ‘Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is: Start your post with a two-letter word. End it with a two-letter word for bonus points. Have fun!’

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20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Paul
    May 14, 2016 @ 05:23:59

    HUGS ❤ ❤ ❤

    Reply

  2. freyathewriter
    May 14, 2016 @ 11:51:14

    Such pain, contained in so few words.

    Reply

  3. John W. Howell
    May 14, 2016 @ 12:14:55

    Hugs.

    Reply

  4. gigoid
    May 14, 2016 @ 13:52:29

    I can share your pain, milady. I, too, have two grandkids, neither of whom I am allowed to visit, except one, my grandson, whom I get to see every month or two for a couple hours…. I haven’t seen my granddaughter at all since she was five days old…. She just had her first birthday….

    I find it is helpful to keep them in our hearts, and pretend we live across the world, unable to visit due to distance, rather than due to the parent’s failure of spirit.
    Also, know that, when they are older, they will want to know us, and we will have that chance, hopefully, to be with them, when they ask for us, as they will….

    Take care, and have patience, milady; your grief is shared, and hopefully, lessened thereby….

    gigoid

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    • willowdot21
      May 14, 2016 @ 14:53:28

      Thank you Ned as ever your words give me strength. You have mentioned your grandchildren before and I know you know what I feel. Sadly there are many people in the same position as us
      .. but that does not make it right. Well the sun is shining we are okay and we have the wonderful day. Be blessed Ned be blessed. xxx

      Reply

  5. Tosha Michelle
    May 14, 2016 @ 14:53:48

    So heartbreaking

    Reply

  6. willowdot21
    May 14, 2016 @ 15:01:17

    It is but what can I do xxx

    Reply

  7. jacquelineobyikocha
    May 14, 2016 @ 17:18:19

    Wow! That’s strong

    Reply

  8. jan
    May 15, 2016 @ 02:06:07

    Good job! I could feel the pain – and “it” is a great two letter word to start and stop with.

    Reply

  9. Lynz Real Cooking
    May 15, 2016 @ 21:43:43

    Very heartfelt Willow!

    Reply

  10. LindaGHill
    May 16, 2016 @ 16:55:03

    Hugs, my dear ❤

    Reply

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