It is August and so Jane is doing : a chain of images each one suggested by the last word in the preceding poem. They’ll be short, a single image of just a few lines. It will be interesting to see where it ends up by the end of the month.
Kat will be doing short 3,4, or 5 line poems no syllable counts of rhymes, starting with the word ‘August’ on the first day. The last word of the poem will be the first word of day two’s poem, and so on until the end of the month.
Finally I shall be doing all types of poetry but each poem will start with the last word in the preceding poem.
Today’s poem is a Shadorma
Deserted.
Deserted
Just empty spaces
Nothing there
Not a soul
I am totally alone
Devoid of all life
Aug 21, 2018 @ 06:38:06
Simple and effective sis 💜
Aug 21, 2018 @ 07:43:20
nice!
Aug 21, 2018 @ 08:53:25
Thank you 💜
Aug 21, 2018 @ 17:21:48
Cheery one next time, please, Willow 🙂
Aug 21, 2018 @ 15:26:49
I shall do my best , there seems to be a downward pattern here!! 🙃
Aug 21, 2018 @ 15:37:50
Yes, well, shake it, please 🙂
Aug 21, 2018 @ 15:43:13
Yes mam will do my best 💜
Aug 22, 2018 @ 19:27:09
🙂
Aug 22, 2018 @ 02:09:01
Beautiful, but heart-wrenching, Willow! I just learned the Shadorma form last year or maybe early this year, can’t remember. But I love it. Hope your words are more fiction, though. ❤🌼
Aug 22, 2018 @ 05:30:01
That was my first attempt at a Shadorma, it is a lovely form of poem I hope to improve. I am glad you liked it , it is a lost hope one though 💜.