Stars like Dice

Stars scattered

She picked the stars up like dice and threw them once and threw twice. Till they were scattered in the skies, an amazing mix to beguile the eye.

Then colouring a deep indigo she made a stunning backdrop for the stars to show. There was such a stunning light and she decided to call it night.

She spread her arms out far and wide and defied any soul to reach the other side. All day she played at this and every now an then she would ignite a sun with just a kiss.

Galaxy after Galaxy she set out within  her being. She was unsure if she was travelling to, or fleeing. Then she had a mad idea, made a planet green and blue and planted the seed for me and you.

Eventually she got bored and looked for some new employment she made oceans and land and all of that was fine and grand. But as she was growing tired she made something less inspired. From within her tired mind she created mankind.

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Vampire Weather
    Nov 26, 2011 @ 15:52:01

    What an interesting perspective on the origins of the universe. A creative, yet in conclusion somewhat cynical, description of nature and life. I sense a certain despair in the final lines, as if mankind has disappointed the narrator and failed to love up to the other great inventions. A thought provoking and creative read. Good work, Willow

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  2. willowdot21
    Nov 26, 2011 @ 19:20:46

    Thank you, well I think she did mess up a bit when she created us!! :o) xx

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  3. Martin Shone
    Nov 26, 2011 @ 20:48:20

    So, God is a woman. She didn’t mess up when she made us, she gave us smiles 🙂

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  4. willowdot21
    Nov 26, 2011 @ 21:10:13

    She did didn’t she 🙂

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  5. gethappy
    Nov 27, 2011 @ 08:50:52

    Wow, this is Willowdot21 the special one. There is something special about your writing.keep writing.Loved it

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  6. willowdot21
    Nov 27, 2011 @ 08:58:33

    Thank you, I hope to ! and I hope you will too.

    Reply

  7. kate58
    Nov 27, 2011 @ 13:39:39

    Loved your take on this! xx

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  8. lilyklynn
    Nov 27, 2011 @ 22:23:30

    I love this. Amazing piece. Xx Lily

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  9. lscotthoughts
    Nov 27, 2011 @ 23:55:02

    Very clever perspective and well written!

    Reply

  10. Heather Whitley Gibson
    Dec 09, 2011 @ 20:19:36

    This is so beautiful and fun!!

    Reply

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