LOOK AT ME

I said, what more can I do to prove my love for you. You said, it’s raining again! I threw myself at your feet to stop you not even seeing me. No use it was in vain. I cooked the best dinner I could, put a lot  of myself into it, you though the carrots tasted like wood.

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I fell from a window in an effort to attract your attention cracked myself open to offer you my blood . You did turn around then……..but only because you had heard the thud.

Cleaned and polished, I rubbed and scrubbed and I worked so hard but you hadn’t noticed and I’d played my best card.

I cleared up the garden I trimmed and skimmed I pruned and tended the blooms still you didn’t notice me. I called you to come and look but what I missed was all you could see.

So I packed my bags and gathered my things. I took off my jewellery and I gave back my rings, that still did nothing you ordered a taxi and when it arrived you put in my things.

So I gave up!

 

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. stephenedwards425
    Jul 10, 2012 @ 20:55:00

    There are times when your writing leaves me breathless…this was one of those times.

    Be encouraged!

    Reply

  2. Vampire Weather
    Jul 11, 2012 @ 15:41:47

    What a touching tale. Almost cinematic and quite engaging. Well done

    Reply

  3. gingerweirgavin weir
    Jul 11, 2012 @ 20:10:55

    So moving, again!

    Reply

  4. zendictive
    Jul 15, 2012 @ 13:24:34

    touching (~_~) chilling, where warm love is no more?

    Reply

  5. eof737
    Jul 29, 2012 @ 05:04:29

    Sometimes we must let go…

    Reply

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