Lost within the mind

Dark night,white spike thunder crash lightening flash. Silent scream violent dream. Lone walk small talk with crow flying low.

Harsh words are  heard. She walks  at her side a bird talks. Low cloud, shouts loud, she throws her head back, body slumps back slack.

No one there to care,she drags herself along the ground, not fair! Lash of rain,on the dark plain earth drinks time shrinks.Woman cries crow flies.

White skin all in. Blood runs off her chin. Tired eyes red rimmed , crow flies horizon skimmed. Sores high thought dark night her soul takes flight.

10 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. barbaramattio
    Jul 09, 2012 @ 21:37:15

    Tremendous! You words are moving and the picture is compelling.


  2. granbee
    Jul 09, 2012 @ 21:43:05

    WOW and WOW again, willowdot–what a marvelous adaptation of the myraid ways in which Old Crow leads the soul!


  3. Ian Moone
    Jul 10, 2012 @ 04:42:37

    I really like reading it, but out loud and very fast is better for me


    • willowdot21
      Jul 10, 2012 @ 09:52:53

      Well spotted that is how I saw it, read in staccato like a machine gun, Rat tat rat tat or something like ! That’s how I heard it in my head glad you liked it.


  4. Wendell A. Brown AKA The Brown One Poet
    Jul 10, 2012 @ 05:09:01

    Image makes a powerful statement with your words! A delight to read!


  5. zendictive
    Jul 15, 2012 @ 13:26:25

    to fly with crows, dark birds and lightening strikes the soul in your literary muse.


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