Stream of Consciousness Saturday. Critic(al)

This is part of LindaGHill’s #SoCs.

Our Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “critic(al).” Use it any way you’d like. Have fun!

Now it is critical that you understand that this sword held aloft here is not Excalibur. I have to say if I am critically on honest. The arm is too thick and masculine to belong to the lady of the lake. While I am being honest the sword itself looks too short and squat to be Excalibur.

Yet here we have an arm extended out of a lonely lake holding a sword aloft.

There is no magical island of Avalon, no Knights or damsels in distress. Just traffic bombing along a busy road, the other side of a wooden fence.

No just a critical Ruby sniffing around. Please don’t be a critic it might not be perfect but it was a lovely walk.

A Critical Acrostic Poem

Can you honestly say it’s the best

Rigourously, honestly the best

Is it truly the best you can do

To be honest I am not impressed

In my opinion, it is not good

Critically honest it’s not all that .

Actually be honest it’s rubbish

Look, don’t blame me, the critic.

15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Feb 23, 2019 @ 07:27:02

    He he! Very good sis 💜

    Reply

  2. Jackie
    Feb 23, 2019 @ 11:34:25

    Looks like a nice peaceful trail to walk! Too about what is on the other side of the fence. Love the touch about the sword.

    Reply

  3. J-Dub
    Feb 23, 2019 @ 14:33:10

    Beautiful pictures. No critic here. That walk seems perfect to me.

    Reply

  4. Dale
    Feb 23, 2019 @ 19:37:29

    😀

    Reply

  5. Betty Hayes Albright
    Feb 23, 2019 @ 22:04:13

    Lovely walk! I especially like the path through the trees. (Maybe because Ruby is there. 😊❤️❤️)

    Reply

  6. robertawrites235681907
    Feb 24, 2019 @ 15:01:54

    A most unusual take, Willow. Well done.

    Reply

  7. Miriam Hurdle
    Feb 25, 2019 @ 01:30:16

    Is it a real place with the sword? It’s very interesting. I like doing acrostic poem. Yours is nicely done, Willow.

    Reply

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