Invisible !

Why am I invisible why am I never heard

No one ever listens to me they treat me as observed!

Always someone elses problems no one listens to me

I think I am a nonentity , impossible to see.

 

Slowly I am disappearing slipping out of sight.

I get over looked on face book Β and ignored in the street

I am standing here Β but it is pointless because I am ignored .

Someone hug me , speak to me notice Β me once more.

54 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. kelihasablog
    Oct 30, 2013 @ 21:09:42

    I’ve been asking myself the very same questions! πŸ˜€ This is wonderful and the art is fabulous!

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    • willowdot21
      Oct 30, 2013 @ 21:15:43

      Strange isn’t it you just sometimes become invisible and no one listens to you. You get shoved out of the way in the supermarket or the street……. Yes I love the art too. πŸ˜‰

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      • kelihasablog
        Oct 30, 2013 @ 21:22:56

        Yes, or when politicians just don’t bother to listen or care what “We the People” want… LOL. I try not to even think about all that…. I could get seriously depressed if I did. Good to be able to visit your site again! πŸ˜€

      • willowdot21
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 14:30:39

        Thanks and it is great to have you back again!!

  2. 47whitebuffalo
    Oct 30, 2013 @ 22:21:03

    Invisible, it’s what the poor often are.
    Hello. Lovely image.
    Sad poem.

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  3. Brenda
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 03:55:47

    Maybe no one listens for awhile, but when you have a voice and the power to write, sooner or later, you will be heard. I believe. [[[HUGS]]] Brenda

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  4. Eric Alagan
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 06:02:24

    To be ignored can be painful.

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  5. LadyBlueRose's Thoughts Into Words
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 06:12:58

    some listen…
    yes the image is gorgeous…
    Happy Samhain….
    Take Care…You Matter…
    )0(
    maryrose

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  6. reikiheidi
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 08:16:20

    You are certainly not invisible here! Your powerful words reach across the miles…
    *hugs* πŸ™‚

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    • willowdot21
      Oct 31, 2013 @ 08:36:43

      Thank you for that I was being self indulgent and unloved yesterday in the real world. I am grateful and always have been for care my WordPress friends have shown me and I hope I have been as caring in return. Hugs and thanks xxx

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      • reikiheidi
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 08:39:05

        It is a strange yet wonderful feeling to know that when the life around us is going to pot, we can turn to our on-line, writing WP family, and know that someone(s) will be there. Somehow it is comforting.
        Keep strong xx

      • willowdot21
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 13:53:35

        Yes I agree and I don’t care if my “real life ” family and friends think that is slightly mad, I don’t care ! Be well and happy!xxxxxxxxx

  7. Wendell A. Brown
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 10:58:08

    You always have my attention! Beautifully written, and very thought provoking! You are unique my sister, and what you bring i do enjoy…hugs and blessings my sister!

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  8. memo
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 11:29:48

    i know how that feels like, and it sucks.

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  9. Johnny Ojanpera
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 14:55:29

    I am listening Willow. Your words are always worth it. At the same time, I know what it means to be ignored. Even by the people closest to me. It hurts for awhile, then fades into normalcy; at least for me. Love the poem btw. πŸ™‚

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  10. Deborah
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 15:44:36

    Beautifully and powerfully expressed. I think everyone experiences it from time to time, and I think that it might happen more as we get older (or maybe we are just more aware of it). Anyway, like many have said, it’s good that we have moments when we know we are heard, moments when we’re not invisible. It makes it easier to get through those moments when the cloak of invisibility seems to be strangling us.

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  11. bearspawprint
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 15:46:07

    You can publish!!! Yay for tech resolution! Good work Vlad πŸ™‚ —— I’m wondering, in public, do you see the people who jostle you, as individual Humans or as moving obstacles? Here in the removed world of WP, it is YOU who makes the effort to reveal yourself, where as in other venue you may try to conceal your Self. Maybe with too much success. Did you know that it actually take energy to keep your invisibility cloak in place? At this stage in life, why bother? You see how sympathetic persons respond here …… How can anyone not be warmed by your Fire or see your Light? As long as you don’t hide. You are beautiful.

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    • willowdot21
      Oct 31, 2013 @ 17:11:55

      Thank you so much Bear, I was being very self obsessed yesterday, toothache and back ache really got me down . All of my friends , you included said such nice things to me that today I can cope . I still have toothache and backache and still getting pushed aside in the shops but hey I can cope I have fire!! hugs Bear you are a torch to us all!! xxxx

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      • bearspawprint
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 20:27:15

        Back ache and tooth ache can each be quite immediate. Blinding agony, even. Nagging at the least. Can’t the dentist work you in?

      • willowdot21
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 20:39:56

        He can’t find the problem so he has put me on antibiotics I hope they work or else it will have to come out!

      • bearspawprint
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 21:23:25

        X-ray should reveal any abscess or gum problems that need antibiotics. To pull a tooth with no problem seems extreme, especially if the tooth is not the problem, Maybe you need another dentist. Just commenting from the other side of the pond where I don’t really know what is going on. However I have been blessed with good dental care for my children and my dentists and maxillofacial surgeons (wisdom teeth Dear son II and III) and Endodonticist (root canal – me) and orthodontist (Dear Son III) have always had to do research to answer my questions. Which they always did. Somehow I always seem to remind them of their Mothers. πŸ™‚ Anyway, “we don’t know” ain’t good enough. Is it in the upper canine area? sinuses are right there. Trigeminal runs near some molars… A tiny crack can make a tooth hyper sentsitive even without decay. A bit of floss or a pop-corn kernel stuck under the gum-line can be worse than aggravating. but to pull a tooth that is not ruined isn’t really kosher. Even a crown (cap) needs the root still there. Don’t let the dentists treat you as if you are invisible. You are quite substantial. It is wrong to have to insist, but sometimes, if you have no advocate to do it for you, you must. You have enough pain without a “mystery” pain, too. Oooo! I get mad when people in service professions don’t do their jobs right. Sorry. I am sorry it hurts. I do hope and pray it gets sorted out soon.

      • willowdot21
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 21:49:56

        Woo! you know a lot about teeth, having three sons I have had many a visit with them when they were young! You are right in all you say this what has happened, I presented with pain and sensitivity in the upper canines ( good guess on your part) xays showed a hairline crack running through the tooth, the sinus canals were visible in the xray. He has given me antibiotics because he thinks there must be a hidden infection, then next week we will investigate further after the antibiotics have had a chance to work. Unfortunately I had a very similar problem with the corresponding tooth on the other side of my mouth. That turned into a full blown abscess and infection and I was in so much pain they had to remove the tooth and it had to be done by a specialist because the sinus tubes ran right by the root, I do hope this will not be a repeat. For over fifty years I have not needed tooth extraction and suddenly twice in one year ……. unlucky or what? Thank you for caring ! xxxxxx

      • bearspawprint
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 21:54:31

        Oh poor baby. 😦

      • willowdot21
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 21:58:49

        πŸ˜‰

      • Deborah
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 22:47:46

        I hope that the antibiotics help and that you don’t have to go through any major procedures. Dental stuff is such a pain, though I don’t need to tell you that. Hope you start to feel better soon.

      • willowdot21
        Oct 31, 2013 @ 22:49:32

        Thank you fingers crossed!

  12. 47whitebuffalo
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 17:31:17

    Willow, for you–some drum power.

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  13. bearspawprint
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 18:08:38

    Oooo Love both of these. πŸ™‚

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  14. 47whitebuffalo
    Oct 31, 2013 @ 18:09:04

    Okay one fail. Let’s try again.

    Hot Scots. Or am I crazy?

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  15. 47whitebuffalo
    Nov 01, 2013 @ 02:25:17

    What?! Are we done with drums?

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  16. WordsFallFromMyEyes
    Nov 26, 2013 @ 08:43:09

    So desolate, Willow. This is so desolate. You really write well these days. I can easily say I see a difference in your skills.

    As for YOU, damn I wish you’d get better quick…

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