23 Jan 2017 22 Comments
in Poems Tags: Flow and Tear, Ronovanwrites, RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge
This week Ronovanwrites has given us the prompts Flow and Tear for our Haiku Challenge .
Heart
Tear my chest open
Put my lost heart on my sleeve
Blood flows I’m broken
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Joy
A tear begins the
The flow of new emotions
Joy for you and me
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Harmful rays flow through
A large tear in the ozone
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Jan 23, 2017 @ 15:58:54
Wow! The first one, “Heart,” is stunningly powerful in image and word. Actually it’s a bit shocking with the subject of a young girl, but children can be broken also.
Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:08:53
Yes even now as a grandma I can remember being broken hearted as a child , but I only used the image to magnify the words it is not necessarily about a child. xx
Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:06:30
a world in need of change, a cry from the heart, amen
Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:10:28
Indeed!
Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:16:47
She’s back.on form!!!! Brilliant!!!
Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:23:16
Lol I wish, but thanks 🙂
Jan 23, 2017 @ 19:04:23
I LOVE the way you have used them all differently again Willow. I wanted to do something with blood flowing but couldn’t get it right, you did it perfectly! 🙂
Jan 23, 2017 @ 22:07:49
Thanks Judy you always give me a boost!
Jan 24, 2017 @ 06:37:29
You always give me a boost when I see how cleverly you use the prompt words and the images you match them with 🙂
Jan 24, 2017 @ 09:24:00
That’s good we boost each other<3💗💟💙💚💝💞
Jan 23, 2017 @ 19:38:07
You really are a powerful Poetess. ♡
Jan 23, 2017 @ 22:05:55
I try
Jan 23, 2017 @ 20:32:52
These are all so good. That last one certainly carries a pertinent message. Love the photo to go with it.
Jan 23, 2017 @ 22:05:36
Thanks xx
Jan 23, 2017 @ 20:33:10
Amen to all. ❤ ❤ ❤
Jan 23, 2017 @ 22:04:55
💜💛💚💙💝💞💟
Jan 24, 2017 @ 12:52:48
Loved this.
Jan 24, 2017 @ 13:17:13
Thank you
Jan 24, 2017 @ 13:29:35
Wonderful willow!
Jan 24, 2017 @ 13:32:08
Thanks ☺
Feb 06, 2017 @ 17:35:12
Loved all three, especially the last one. That picture of the polar bear is heart-wrenching. ❤
Feb 06, 2017 @ 19:05:44
The world is in a sorry state!