RonovanWrites #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge #133 #Flow&Tear


This  week  Ronovanwrites   has  given us  the  prompts  Flow  and Tear  for our  Haiku  Challenge .

Rules  and  Pingback  here 




Tear my  chest open

Put my lost heart on my sleeve

Blood flows I’m broken



A tear begins the

The  flow of  new emotions

Joy  for  you  and  me

Global Warming

Harmful rays flow  through

A large  tear in the ozone

Nothing we can do?


22 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Olga
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 15:58:54

    Wow! The first one, “Heart,” is stunningly powerful in image and word. Actually it’s a bit shocking with the subject of a young girl, but children can be broken also.


    • willowdot21
      Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:08:53

      Yes even now as a grandma I can remember being broken hearted as a child , but I only used the image to magnify the words it is not necessarily about a child. xx


  2. bwcarey
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:06:30

    a world in need of change, a cry from the heart, amen


  3. Ritu
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 16:16:47

    She’s back.on form!!!! Brilliant!!!


  4. Judy E Martin
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 19:04:23

    I LOVE the way you have used them all differently again Willow. I wanted to do something with blood flowing but couldn’t get it right, you did it perfectly! 🙂


  5. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 19:38:07

    You really are a powerful Poetess. ♡


  6. Pat B
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 20:32:52

    These are all so good. That last one certainly carries a pertinent message. Love the photo to go with it.


  7. Let's CUT the Crap!
    Jan 23, 2017 @ 20:33:10

    Amen to all. ❤ ❤ ❤


  8. reinventionsreena
    Jan 24, 2017 @ 12:52:48

    Loved this.


  9. Lynz Real Cooking
    Jan 24, 2017 @ 13:29:35

    Wonderful willow!


  10. Vashti Quiroz-Vega
    Feb 06, 2017 @ 17:35:12

    Loved all three, especially the last one. That picture of the polar bear is heart-wrenching. ❤


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