Just Jot It January. Day 25, Prediction.

Today is day 25 of Just Jot it January. Our prompt for today is Prediction brought to us by Dar at Darswords if you have not been to Dar’s blog yet do visit you will enjoy.

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Prediction

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The maiden saw it coming

Like the mists off of the sea

A low persistent drumming

Striving to be set free.

She warned, no one took heed

Banging doors she shouted

We’ll all be washed away

Her words they all just doubted.

She told them it will be here soon

Then came the deadly quiet

The tides reacting to the moon.

The sky was black as night.

The sea simply disappeared

A deadly silence fell

The townfolk froze in in fear.

All trapped under a spell.

I told them the maiden wept

But no one did believe.

As in the giant waves swept.

****************

I saw it coming, I had to leave

It’s devistion was my prediction.

I live on, still for them I grieve

Their memories my affliction.

#jusjojan

9 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Jan 25, 2018 @ 05:22:32

    Great poems sis 💜

    Reply

  2. Michael
    Jan 25, 2018 @ 17:19:49

    I imagine it to be an awful prediction knowing what is coming and no one taking any notice. So long as you got to higher ground I guess.

    Reply

  3. Betty Hayes Albright
    Jan 25, 2018 @ 21:13:47

    Survivor’s guilt…. That’s hard to deal with. Great post, Willow. 💓💕

    Reply

  4. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Jan 25, 2018 @ 22:00:33

    Perfectly penned, Willow. ♡

    Reply

  5. jetgirlcos
    Jan 26, 2018 @ 04:58:46

    How horrible for her. Having something important and relevant to say, and being dismissed. Beautifully written, Willow.

    Reply

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