This part of Sue Vincent‘s Thursday photo prompt -Secrets #writephoto
Use the image below to create a post on your own blog… poetry, prose, humour… light or dark, whatever you choose, by noon (GMT) Wednesday 16th November and link back to this post with a pingback. Please make sure that the pingback works and if not, copy and paste your link into the comments section of Sue Vincent’s post.
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I keep their secrets.
I was not always as you see me now, decaying old ready to take a final bow.
I was beautiful tall and strong , a stable bet to set your life upon.
It is cold at night and the wind finds my every crack
I tremble and shudder now as the tubes roll by on the nearby track.
I brace myself against the traffic’s thunder,
Each day that passes the fact I still stand here is a wonder.
I keep their secrets
I used to hear the children sing
Families living in me weaved their lives.
The chime of doorbells as they’d ring.
As I stood there for them strong in their joys and strife.
I have seen babies born and babies die,
Mothers grieving, husbands turning a blind eye.
Birthdays, marriages, divorces all old hat, kindly couples happy in each others care
Evil bastards who knock their women flat out on the stair,
Or shout them down until they loose all hope
Weighted down with worries and too many children to cope.
I keep their secrets
The birds are now happy in my rafters
Their cooing fills my rooms instead of laughter ,
It is still a happy sound not unlike the sound
Of children playing here there and all around.
I keep their secrets
At night lovers climb through my open doors
They make love upon my dust floors
For them I am their only meeting place ,
For what ever reason they may have to hide their face.
I keep their secrets .
Drinkers also drug addicts too
They hide within my walls to do what they must do.
I am decaying crumbling away
I do not want to go nor yet do I want to stay.
Try me out I could be the best deal for you
If you build me up I shall protect you true.
I could be the canvas to build your life upon.
I could be rebuilt, decorated and glazed I could dance again to children’s song.
I will keep your secrets.
I do like where you have taken this piece, all possibilities explored…so well done.
Thank you , I sometimes feel bad for old empty buildings… silly but that is me .
Yes I know its that neglect factor isn’t it, they are left to rot until someone comes along and on the odd occasion restores them or more often tears them down, all that history lost
Yes so much waste, beautiful old buildings can so easily with care be made whole again. In my road in the past few years eight large beautiful houses have been torn down and “One and two bedroom apartments ” have been built in their places.. lots of them, these houses had huge gardens!
Yes its become about stacking in as many folk as they can in any small space…thankfully where I live that hasn’t happened around me at any rate…
So sad soon there will be no countryside left, they just keep on building…. they will not get our house though!… at least I hope not!
No way I say…I have visions of that scene from Hitchkikers Guide to the Galaxy where he lays down in front of the bulldozer….
Arthur Dent! I am right there with him!!
And I’m sure your protest would not enter in the hypothetical…
Well as long as I could have earpluggs for the Vogon Poetry!
Have you ever tried to write Vogon Poetry? It is a fun exercise, you just make everything wrong, and read it out loud to someone and if they cringe you’re a winner…
I reckon I already write Vogon Poetry! 🙂
The question is can you say it with a gravely voice??
Fail………… I failed again!!
lol…..have a lovely weekend…when it arrives…
Thank you and you too!!
I just read you story, I could not comment there as it said page not found… but it was excellent , very chilling and sadly very near to the truth! Well done Michael!
Thank you. Sue is having the same issue….I don’t know what the issue is…
OH! another wordpress problem or is it a Vogon rouse?
Both?? Then again it was you who wrote the poetry…lol
Then would that be a Vogon success 🙂
Precisely….
YES!!!!
🙂
You’re a winner 🙂
why thank you ………….. er I think!
I shall pay close attention to future poetic posts from you..
Be afraid be very afraid! 🙂 Goodnight I must away now!
Bye….Lunch time for me…
00.29 here so must go to bed!
Another tale beautifully woven, Willow 🙂
The house, slowly dying but it has memories and hope.
Much like the rest of us 😉
That is so true!
This is simply stunning Willow 😊
Thank you Ritu I originally wrote it a few years ago but with a little tweaking it fitted the photo well, I think. I always feel for empty buildings. They seem wasted. xxx
They do… and you captured the essence of what those walls may have seen. But will never back able to speak of!
Yes there are always dark secrets.
True xx
I always feel that old abandoned homes have many stories to tell. You give void.ce to the home beautifully.
Thank you sometimes I grieve for old buildings.xx
So different Willow, I really like it
Thanks Lynz I always feel for old derelict buildings,.
yes me too
You have a special way of weaving words. Wow. Willow. ❤
Thanks Tess I do try
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