Car Crash

Hey come with me , she said. I can’t I am trapped I said shaking my head.

Here she said come here I am holding this door open and your way is clear.

I moved towards her and I took her hand, she had a fearsome grip come she said you’ll be just grand.

Minutes before it had been a normal day, on my way to work another week just to get my pay.

I was just driving normally when I saw this car coming at me from the other way.

He over took a lorry and hit a central bollard, hard. As I saw the bottom of his car sailing towards me I thought.” I’ve been dealt the final card!

My door is stuck fast and I see smoke. I begin to panic, come on , come on she said , move to me there is no need to get manic. I do as I am bid though I don’t hold out much hope.

She is right , this bright young thing . She helps me to the curb, there is blood all down my legs funny their don’t even sting. The police are here now and an ambulance followed by a fire engine.

Everyone is running round and as my car bursts into flames the fireman start to shout. They are forcing my car door open I start screaming at them, ” its all right I am here, I am out.”

They don’t listen nor do they see me , then as they stand I can’t believe my eyes I am in the drivers seat ………… I’ve died?

So who are you I ask. Feeling so confused and scared , I am Death she smiled. “who” I asked, again she smile and whispered you heard!

You don’t look like death I said , you are too young you can’t be Death if you are Death, that would mean that I am dead. She put her arm around me and smiled at me and said “I am sorry, none of that was your fault. Now off with me you now head”

There was no point in arguing and she did look so very kind. There was nothing else I could do. I really do not want to leave this world but I am dead  and that  is true.

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. kelihasablog
    Mar 17, 2013 @ 18:17:18

    Excellent! 😀

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Mar 17, 2013 @ 18:29:57

      Thank you , I did have a crash similar to this but only smoke and no flames. I was stuck in the car because my door was crushed in, and a helpful young woman did usher me on her side I am grateful to her she was very young and so wise, definitely not death. never found out who she was though!

      Reply

  2. Sasha Jenna Spears
    Mar 17, 2013 @ 18:52:45

    vivid imagery….

    Reply

  3. montybasset
    Mar 17, 2013 @ 19:51:53

    I’m trucker, seen three crashes in three days, pratts, and all nothing to do with me, oh and put your headlights on, I’ll squash you less… Mwhahahahaha

    Reply

  4. Patrick pattachou2009
    Mar 18, 2013 @ 00:13:09

    Hello
    Still from beautiful word, I wish you a good week,
    best regards patrick.

    Reply

  5. zendictive
    Mar 18, 2013 @ 10:05:46

    wow (~_~)

    Reply

  6. penpusherpen
    Mar 18, 2013 @ 15:39:34

    a different twist on Death and his/her persona, Willow, we never know when or where, but it’s scary how quickly we can be snatched for this life of ours. xPenx

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Mar 18, 2013 @ 16:24:07

      Yes Pen it is a surprisingly tenuous thread that binds us to this life. We never know what or when we will be removed or by who. I think deaf comes in many shapes and sizes.

      Reply

  7. tazeinmirzasaad
    Mar 18, 2013 @ 23:12:57

    My dear friend, I have nominated you The Dragon’s Loyalty award! Please visit this link for the rules:transcendingbordersblog.wordpress.com/2013/03/19/the-dragons-loyalty-award-2/

    Reply

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