Raven, Nonet.

Take my heart for it, I have  no need

You have hunger your eyes show greed

Take it, rip it, you can feed.

Just leave  my eyes for tears

And to face my fears.

My feelings gone

Broken song




A poem I wrote in 2013, I have turned it into a rhyming Nonet.

35 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Feb 15, 2021 @ 21:08:20

    Wow, Sis!


  2. Annette Rochelle Aben
    Feb 15, 2021 @ 21:22:50

    Deep. Well done


  3. Raven
    Feb 15, 2021 @ 23:27:46

    Reblogged this on About the Jez of It and commented:
    My reason is obvious.. Raven loves it of course


  4. Sadje
    Feb 16, 2021 @ 03:08:07

    What a poignant poem Willow. There is an Urdu poem which mirrors these feelings!


  5. bwcarey
    Feb 16, 2021 @ 03:56:46

    keep pouring it out, one day you will put your voice to it, why not


  6. Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    Feb 16, 2021 @ 08:52:09

    I am writing nonet at the moment too. Love this one, Willow. ❀ x


  7. Dale
    Feb 16, 2021 @ 21:34:37

    Oh wow, Willow… Wonderful


  8. thoughtsnlifeblog
    Feb 17, 2021 @ 15:29:32

    OMG – this is awesome. Gosh you are the queen of poetry and all its forms – of which i have no clue. The words and that painting amazing. Did you draw/paint that picture, it so amazing and fitting the words so well. Powerful poem.


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