TJ’s Household Haiku Challenge.Earth and Whirlwind.

26 Sep 2017 31 Comments

by willowdot21 in Poems Tags: Earth and Whirlwind, TJ's Household Challenge

This week TJ of Life’s too short to drink bad wine has given us the topical words Earth and Whirlwind.

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Topsy, turvy world

Ravished by savage whirlwind

Earth wind and fire.

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Whirlwind deviation.

Ripping up the land

Swirling up and moving all

Set up for a fall.

31 Comments (+add yours?)

Ritu
Sep 26, 2017 @ 19:07:31

Love your takes sis xx

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- willowdot21
  Sep 26, 2017 @ 21:06:11
  
  Thank you Sis 💖
  
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JT Twissel
Sep 26, 2017 @ 21:25:19

Nice ! I hope you don’t get any whirlwinds in your part of the world.

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- willowdot21
  Sep 26, 2017 @ 21:38:55
  
  It can happen but very rarely!
  
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Bridgesburning Chris
Sep 27, 2017 @ 00:26:38

The turbulence very timely

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- willowdot21
  Sep 27, 2017 @ 08:21:15
  
  Undeed
  
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Bridgesburning Chris
Sep 27, 2017 @ 02:26:10

Very nice!

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- willowdot21
  Sep 27, 2017 @ 08:21:30
  
  Thank you 🌹
  
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Eric Alagan
Sep 27, 2017 @ 02:46:18

Love both the haiku 🙂

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- willowdot21
  Sep 27, 2017 @ 08:20:51
  
  Thank you Eric 💜
  
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micketalbot
Sep 27, 2017 @ 09:47:14

Beautiful haiku.
Picking you up on the point you made on my recent series, ‘BIRDSONG’,, as in you like the way I upend them. Well, what I have gleaned from all the controversy with/over the in english written haiku is the top and bottom lines should be interchangeable and still make a haiku, Your thoughts ?

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- willowdot21
  Sep 27, 2017 @ 23:43:02
  
  Oh! I did not know that …best I check mine out…it’s a clever thought and makes sense!
  
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  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:32:34
    
    I know there is a haiku challenge out there that state that in there rules that it must be reversible., like you said it does make sense.
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:38:41
    
    I shall try this rule! 🌹💜
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:47:22
    
    You’ll know when it does not read right when upended.
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:48:03
    
    Alas I will 🌹
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:51:34
    
    You will 🙂 Night, night, early to bed for me, all sorts going on tomorrow/later on..
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:52:42
    
    I need bed now finally tired, night night 🌹
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 05:34:39
    
    25 to 8 AM, TORRENTIAL overnight rain spoilt my day. 😦
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 08:22:49
    
    Sorry to hear that lets hope today is better 🌹💜
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 05:37:52
    
    Forgot the good morning, distracted by my not so good one, hope yours is better! 🙂
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 08:22:09
    
    So far I have overslept!!
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 10:41:35
    
    No doubt your wide awake now 🙂 Strange this particular comment of yours, (over slept), I can’t find on google, on Microsoft edge at the mo, going back on google as soon as.
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 09:45:02
    
    Do you mean you don’t understand overslept. I meant I had a bad night and did not wake up at my usual time. I ‘overslept’ by 2 hours missing a Drs appointment at 8.30am! Luckily the fitted me in at 10.30am. If you didn’t mean that ignore me 😊
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 10:04:07
    
    No, lol, your comment, “I overslept”,
    is nowhere to be found here whilst using Google Chrome, yet on Microsoft Edge it is. The latter is where I access my emails, and that is how I stumbled on the overslept comment, on chrome now and it is still not showing in the notifications, strange, or what?
  - willowdot21
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 10:21:04
    
    Very strange 😱
  - micketalbot
    Sep 28, 2017 @ 11:01:07
    
    Yep!
Lynz Real Cooking
Sep 27, 2017 @ 17:57:46

Wow nice

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- willowdot21
  Sep 27, 2017 @ 18:03:44
  
  Thanks lynz
  
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- willowdot21
  Oct 08, 2017 @ 05:49:08
  
  Thank you TJ lots of good replies to your prompt! 🌹
  
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