This week TJ of Life’s too short to drink bad wine has given us the topical words Earth and Whirlwind.
Topsy, turvy world
Ravished by savage whirlwind
Earth wind and fire.
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Whirlwind deviation.
Ripping up the land
Swirling up and moving all
Set up for a fall.
Sep 26, 2017 @ 19:07:31
Love your takes sis xx
Sep 26, 2017 @ 21:06:11
Thank you Sis 💖
Sep 26, 2017 @ 21:25:19
Nice ! I hope you don’t get any whirlwinds in your part of the world.
Sep 26, 2017 @ 21:38:55
It can happen but very rarely!
Sep 27, 2017 @ 00:26:38
The turbulence very timely
Sep 27, 2017 @ 08:21:15
Undeed
Sep 27, 2017 @ 02:26:10
Very nice!
Sep 27, 2017 @ 08:21:30
Thank you 🌹
Sep 27, 2017 @ 02:46:18
Love both the haiku 🙂
Sep 27, 2017 @ 08:20:51
Thank you Eric 💜
Sep 27, 2017 @ 09:47:14
Beautiful haiku.
Picking you up on the point you made on my recent series, ‘BIRDSONG’,, as in you like the way I upend them. Well, what I have gleaned from all the controversy with/over the in english written haiku is the top and bottom lines should be interchangeable and still make a haiku, Your thoughts ?
Sep 27, 2017 @ 23:43:02
Oh! I did not know that …best I check mine out…it’s a clever thought and makes sense!
Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:32:34
I know there is a haiku challenge out there that state that in there rules that it must be reversible., like you said it does make sense.
Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:38:41
I shall try this rule! 🌹💜
Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:47:22
You’ll know when it does not read right when upended.
Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:48:03
Alas I will 🌹
Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:51:34
You will 🙂 Night, night, early to bed for me, all sorts going on tomorrow/later on..
Sep 28, 2017 @ 00:52:42
I need bed now finally tired, night night 🌹
Sep 28, 2017 @ 05:34:39
25 to 8 AM, TORRENTIAL overnight rain spoilt my day. 😦
Sep 28, 2017 @ 08:22:49
Sorry to hear that lets hope today is better 🌹💜
Sep 28, 2017 @ 05:37:52
Forgot the good morning, distracted by my not so good one, hope yours is better! 🙂
Sep 28, 2017 @ 08:22:09
So far I have overslept!!
Sep 28, 2017 @ 10:41:35
No doubt your wide awake now 🙂 Strange this particular comment of yours, (over slept), I can’t find on google, on Microsoft edge at the mo, going back on google as soon as.
Sep 28, 2017 @ 09:45:02
Do you mean you don’t understand overslept. I meant I had a bad night and did not wake up at my usual time. I ‘overslept’ by 2 hours missing a Drs appointment at 8.30am! Luckily the fitted me in at 10.30am. If you didn’t mean that ignore me 😊
Sep 28, 2017 @ 10:04:07
No, lol, your comment, “I overslept”,
is nowhere to be found here whilst using Google Chrome, yet on Microsoft Edge it is. The latter is where I access my emails, and that is how I stumbled on the overslept comment, on chrome now and it is still not showing in the notifications, strange, or what?
Sep 28, 2017 @ 10:21:04
Very strange 😱
Sep 28, 2017 @ 11:01:07
Yep!
Sep 27, 2017 @ 17:57:46
Wow nice
Sep 27, 2017 @ 18:03:44
Thanks lynz
Oct 08, 2017 @ 05:49:08
Thank you TJ lots of good replies to your prompt! 🌹