TJ’s Household Haiku : Window and Heart.

This week TJ has given us the words Window and Heart  and a beautiful photo of a castle for our weekly Haiku prompt.

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Trapped  Haiku 

Heart broken am I

Trapped at the window not free

I wish I could fly.

Window  in  the Castle 

Through the small window

The cracked  heart of the moonlight

Holds dust motes like hope.

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19 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Sep 10, 2017 @ 11:03:42

    Great takes!!!!

    Reply

  2. Lynz Real Cooking
    Sep 10, 2017 @ 11:58:19

    Really nice!

    Reply

  3. Betty Hayes Albright
    Sep 10, 2017 @ 22:27:47

    I especially love the second one! Lovely. ❣️

    Reply

  4. Olga
    Sep 11, 2017 @ 13:28:55

    Loved both, but the second one is amazing…”cracked heart of the moolight”. Wonderful imagery. ❤

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  5. tjparis
    Sep 24, 2017 @ 12:55:48

    I love both of these but the second is truly brilliant! Just such a perfect haiku.

    Reply

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  7. micketalbot
    Sep 24, 2017 @ 14:49:07

    please don’t try
    many have done
    and many have died
    and breathing that dust
    surprised we’ve survived
    loved your haikg

    Bonus buy, a link to Olga, TJ has her name up but no link.

    Reply

  8. Judy E Martin
    Sep 24, 2017 @ 16:48:02

    Well done Sis, You have nailed these again this week 🙂

    Reply

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