
This #TankaTuesday challenge explores Ekphrastic poetry, inspired by works of art.
Colleen nsays :”I’m fascinated by fine art. Much of my newfound knowledge of art comes from Rebecca Budd’s blog, Chasing Art.com/blog. Many thanks to Rebecca for the inspiration.
This painting was featured on Rebecca’s post: PORTRAIT OF LADY AGNEW OF LOCHNAW BY JOHN SINGER SARGENT
You will definitely want to read Rebecca’s post. It’s full of wonderful information!
(Find more of John Singer Sargent’s paintings on National Galleries Scotland).”
This week, using the painting as your inspiration, please write either a syllabic poetry form or a freestyle poem, including a syllabic form (both poetry forms on the same post).
REMEMBER… don’t just describe the woman… we can all see her. Like all of us, this woman has a story. Write THAT poem…

This is a Lanterne Poem .
The view.
I
Watch you
Approaching
My blood boils in
Me.
My
Eyes watch
You undress
They beckon you
On.
Now
You see
Me sitting
Are you startled
No
Your
Naked
Body show
The excitement
Felt.
You
Take me
My dress falls
Crumpled and torn
Spent
Feb 21, 2023 @ 14:50:13
Love it, Sis 💛
Feb 21, 2023 @ 14:59:53
Thank you Sis 💜💜
Feb 21, 2023 @ 14:53:51
A most interesting picture. I remember it.
Feb 21, 2023 @ 14:58:04
It’s so beautiful isn’t it 💜😍
Feb 22, 2023 @ 08:07:00
I meant to add, Willow, that your poem was extraordinary.
Feb 22, 2023 @ 10:29:51
Thank you Robbie it truly spoke to me 💜😌
Feb 21, 2023 @ 18:46:16
She does have a rather seductive look about her, doesn’t she?
Feb 21, 2023 @ 18:47:45
I certainly think so, it’s a very life like painting 💜
Feb 21, 2023 @ 20:25:20
Reading smut books again, are you?
😉
Feb 21, 2023 @ 20:45:01
How did you guess… But come on look at her eyes 👀💜💜
Feb 21, 2023 @ 21:06:51
Haha! 🧡🧡
Feb 22, 2023 @ 00:49:17
wow Willow! Such a sensual poem! xo
Feb 22, 2023 @ 07:40:48
Thank you Carol 💜💜
Feb 22, 2023 @ 06:39:35
So the lovely dress is ruined. I hope she doesn’t mind. Thanks for sharing. xo
Feb 22, 2023 @ 07:32:12
Thank you Selma I think her eyes give you the answer 💜
Feb 22, 2023 @ 21:18:28
🤔how hot that was 😁❤️
Feb 22, 2023 @ 21:26:32
Why thank you 😄
Feb 23, 2023 @ 01:11:31
My first read felt as if the affection was unwanted (“my blood boils”, “crumpled and torn/spent”). My second read found passion (“They beckon you/On”, “The excitement/Felt”). Either way, great poem, Willow!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Feb 23, 2023 @ 06:00:22
Thank you Yvette yes I was looking for passion in my words … It’s all in how the reader interpretation though I have found.💜
Feb 23, 2023 @ 02:14:40
I can imagine her seeing and doing all of these things with her lover. Ooh la la!
Feb 23, 2023 @ 05:58:21
Thank you, yes she certainly has the look…💜
Feb 23, 2023 @ 16:37:49
❤
Feb 23, 2023 @ 17:27:51
💜💜
Feb 23, 2023 @ 15:14:43
He’s a real bodice ripper, isn’t he? LOL! She does have a come hither look in her eyes… ❤️
Feb 23, 2023 @ 15:59:46
Well I think so on both counts 😂🙂💜
Feb 23, 2023 @ 17:20:51
LOL! 🤣 ❤️🔥
Feb 23, 2023 @ 17:23:40
😊😊
Feb 23, 2023 @ 16:32:18
Oh! I never thought of that for the reason for the look in her eyes! Very nice.
Feb 23, 2023 @ 17:32:00
thank you, I saw it there in her eyes 😊
Feb 23, 2023 @ 17:34:27
It’s getting warm in here 😉
Feb 23, 2023 @ 18:10:15
It is ? 😉
Feb 23, 2023 @ 18:35:27
Oh, this is the most passionate take I’ve read yet on the portrait! Wonderful!
Feb 23, 2023 @ 18:47:49
Thank you Luanne I saw it in her eyes thank you for reading 💜
Feb 23, 2023 @ 19:21:03
You’re welcome!
Feb 23, 2023 @ 19:31:17
💜💜