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短歌 火曜日

This week Colleen suggests we try Random word poetry. Which is something that Jane Dougherty started writing last year. Colleen said : “I think this is a great way to find inspiration, so let’s try it.
Below, I’ve generated a list of 100 random words. The idea is to read through the words, searching for a word that sparks your inspiration.
Then, choose no less than three words to use in your poem.
You can use as many words as you’d like, but at a minimum—you must use three words from the list. This is a great time to experiment with freestyle or free verse poetry (defined on the cheat sheet).
If you write a free verse or freestyle poem, please include a syllabic form to accompany it. That means you’ll write two poems. Have fun making connections between the two forms.

I chose to write an Abhanga. The Abhanga a poem in any number of 4-line stanzas with 6-6-6-4 syllables each. L2 and L3 rhyme. The end rhyme scheme is abbc. It is customary to title your poetry.
These are the words I chose *Rambunctious *maddening *dysfunctional * rampant *sashay *bizarre
*Quicksand *unruly* hurl *walk *capricious *innocent *voyage
“mayhem *push *clocks *trap *brick *carry *safe
The child
That child is maddening
Rambunctious slight of hand
Quicksilver and quicksand
Slipping your grasp.
Unruly they hurl past
Dysfunctional they say
They don’t walk they sashay
Lion rampant.
Capricious and bizarre
They’re still an innocent
Their voyage mayhem bent
Still but a dream.
Don’t push them to watch clocks
Don’t trap or brick them up
Their spirits need such luck
Carry them safe

Jan 31, 2023 @ 15:36:03
Ha ha! The words you chose go so well with a lot of children I can think of 🙂
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:17:54
Lol children can be a nightmare one minute and brilliant the next 💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:45:51
Adults tend to lose that magic 🙂
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:51:17
Yes strange that🤗🤗🤗
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:54:46
🙂
Jan 31, 2023 @ 19:06:49
🤣🤩🤣
Jan 31, 2023 @ 16:03:19
Lovely poem. I’m just a big kid at heart myself.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:14:48
Thank you Glyn 💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 16:20:13
Such lovely poetry Willow🤍
“Carry them safe”… Most certainly we must 🤍
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:13:39
I know I have had three sons and two grandsons 💜🙂🙂
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:16:35
😁Yes… Your poetry speaks of experience 🤗 🤍
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:21:05
Lol 🤣🤣🤣 and I am still standing 💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:22:33
Lol a grand achievement 😁🎉
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:24:30
💜💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 16:25:10
Hi Willow, I really like this poem, it so different and clever.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:12:52
We know what it is like to raise boys don’t we Robbie 💜☺️
Feb 01, 2023 @ 04:02:32
Haha, yes, indeed.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:20:15
Willow, this Abhanga series is brilliant! Your grandson is adorable. Love it! Great poem. 💛
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:23:26
Lol thank you Colleen my eldest gradson is adorable but this poem is really about my eldest son who will be fifty this year!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:33:04
Ha! That’s really funny, Willow. I love it. 😀
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:37:02
Well it’s an easy assumption to make but my eldest was a whirlwind and a real handful where as the eldest gradson is so gentle quiet and caring 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:49:46
Isn’t that interesting how that happens? I love it. Your grandboys are adorable.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:52:04
Thank you I think they are😊
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:52:49
🥳💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:21:55
Love it, Sis 💛
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:24:10
Thank you Sis 💜💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:40:06
Wonderful! Poem goes perfectly with that adorable child!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:42:52
The absolute madness of my eldest who will be fifty this year 💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:45:09
Beautiful imagery of children and love the last line 🙂
Jan 31, 2023 @ 17:46:48
I like the light of hope by the end. No child is beyond help.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:22:27
Absolutely not 😊
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:47:48
A beautifully crafted poem with a message that I wholly like!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:49:52
Thank you children are so special they always get there in the end 🤣🤣
Jan 31, 2023 @ 20:09:04
That definitely describes my childhood! Well done.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 20:14:13
All children are wonderful, it describes our eldest son 💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 20:37:12
Perfect words chosen to represent most children!
Very nicely done.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 21:42:38
Thank you 💜💜, I based it on my eldest who will be fifty this year 🤣🥺
Jan 31, 2023 @ 21:51:14
Awww… how sweet! 🧡🧡💞
Jan 31, 2023 @ 22:17:54
Lol he was a handful bless he’s a star now 💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 22:43:03
Funny how the more trouble they were, the more chances they become stars 😉 🧡🧡
Feb 01, 2023 @ 06:48:30
Oh! Yes that’s very true bless them 😂😂
Feb 01, 2023 @ 14:38:01
😉 One is STILL giving me grief and he will be 25 soon!
Feb 01, 2023 @ 15:21:59
Lol wait until their 35 and 45💜💜
Feb 01, 2023 @ 15:44:07
You mean when they are truly adults?
Feb 01, 2023 @ 16:00:36
And beyond!!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 21:05:31
You certainly know children, and the importance of letting them be those bizarre creatures!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 21:39:52
After three boys and two grandsons I have a little insight 💜💜😉😉
Jan 31, 2023 @ 22:30:31
Wow! Willow, this sounded complicated, but you did a great job. A great job handling children, too.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 22:37:23
I love free spirits this is based on our eldest son 😅
Feb 01, 2023 @ 10:09:11
Wise words. Children (some!) A breeze one moment, a
hurricane the next! Great poem.
Feb 01, 2023 @ 10:45:23
Thank you Joy I agree a pendulum of extremes 💜
Feb 03, 2023 @ 16:54:41
Wow! Great use of all those words.
Feb 03, 2023 @ 17:50:14
Thank you it’s a subject close to my heart 💜
Feb 04, 2023 @ 13:54:34
Wise words, Willow. Well done!
Feb 04, 2023 @ 14:46:30
Thank you Jennie 😊
Feb 04, 2023 @ 15:24:37
You are welcome, Willow.
Feb 04, 2023 @ 17:58:10
💜💜
Feb 04, 2023 @ 22:32:59
Yes! Let kids be rambunctious, wild, and free! I love it, Willow!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
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Feb 04, 2023 @ 23:35:46
Thank you Yvette 💜💜
Feb 14, 2023 @ 18:45:22
I agree, no rushing kids, they need to enjoy each moment. Beautiflul poem.
Feb 14, 2023 @ 19:32:28
Thank you, based on my eldest who is now coming up to fifty and is my hero who sees all of the moon 🌹