
WELCOME TO TANKA TUESDAY!
This week, using the painting as your inspiration, please write either a syllabic poetry form or a freestyle poem, including a syllabic form

Your challenge for this week:
Is to write Ekphrastic poem.
The beautiful painting above has inspired me to write a Sijo. The Sijo, a Korean form believed to have first been used in the fourteenth century. It is similar in structure to various Japanese forms such as Haiku. As with many forms of poetry, the Sijo became a preferred poetry form of the yangban or ruling class as well as royalty. They were written in Chinese and were originally short songs set to music. The focus of the Sijo is usually nature and contemplation.
Three Lines 14-16 syllables per lineA total of 44-46 syllables for the entire poem.

Cold, cold, cold.
No weather so artic could out freeze her soul.
No snow blizzard could chill her more, her heart is like ice from winters depths.
Her countenance belies the hate she carries, heavy. The lady of the snows.
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Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:19:02
Love this!
Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:20:47
Thank you Sis 💜
Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:21:57
Hi Willow, a fabulous poem. I also had rather dark thoughts invoked by this painting which is interesting. I have sent you an email.
Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:23:26
Thank you Colleen , that is strange that we both saw dark? I shall check my mail thank you 💜
Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:26:42
Very nice poem willow! ❤ ❤
Jan 24, 2023 @ 17:06:28
Thank you Carol 💜💜
Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:54:38
I like the cheekiness of this 🙂
Jan 24, 2023 @ 17:05:49
Thank you
Jan 24, 2023 @ 19:55:36
Great use of the pictural prompt ~ like that you described the type of poem. 😊
Jan 24, 2023 @ 20:35:26
Thank you, I like the Sijo it’s a lyrical form which I really like the freedom of. 💜
Jan 24, 2023 @ 21:14:28
A woman best avoided! (K)
Jan 24, 2023 @ 22:28:46
Yes indeed at all costs 😊
Jan 24, 2023 @ 21:37:49
Extraordinary poem, Willow. Beautifully expressed tension. Bravo.
Jan 24, 2023 @ 22:06:52
Thank you Gwen it’s such an evocative painting isn’t it 💜💜
Jan 25, 2023 @ 11:04:51
So true! 😊
Jan 25, 2023 @ 11:13:04
Yes indeed 💜
Jan 25, 2023 @ 03:05:48
Winter can be like that. It feels personal.
Jan 25, 2023 @ 06:49:09
Yes and it’s very cold here , hope you are warm and safe 💜
Jan 25, 2023 @ 18:20:32
I woke up to it snowing and the snowing continues. Thanks, Willow, and same for you ❤
Jan 25, 2023 @ 22:09:47
Stay warm and safe 💜
Jan 25, 2023 @ 17:39:30
Sijo is a new form for me. It sounds good. Your interpretation is so different though. I admire where this painting took you, Willow.😊
Jan 25, 2023 @ 22:12:11
Thank you Balroop, I like the Sijo .I love the painting but I saw her in a dark shadow.
Jan 25, 2023 @ 19:25:52
You picked up on a tension in the woman’s stance that’s no one else noticed. This is an excellent capture, Willow.
Jan 25, 2023 @ 22:08:48
Thank you Colleen something just spoke to me 💜
Jan 27, 2023 @ 11:55:37
Well done!
Jan 27, 2023 @ 12:30:56
Thank you so much 💜
Jan 28, 2023 @ 00:03:20
You are welcome!
Jan 27, 2023 @ 22:31:14
That was fantastic, Willow! I loved it!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Jan 30, 2023 @ 03:13:05
You captured her expression and seadon 🙂
Jan 30, 2023 @ 07:00:55
Thank you 💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 06:45:27
Wow, Willow, this is beautiful, but, GOSH, you went DARK! :-O
❤
David
Jan 31, 2023 @ 07:28:58
Thank you David the painting spoke to me and it was dark …..a beautiful painting to work with 💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 12:16:19
I love all the interpretations of this artwork, Willow, and you went to the dark side. Her expression is hard to read, which has left lots of room for creativity. Beautiful poem. Thanks for introducing me too the Sijo too!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 12:41:36
Thank D. I love the Sijo it gives you so much scope to be syllabic and to use synonyms . The fabulous painting has inspired many feelings in everyone! 💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 12:43:17
I always like the opportunity for the extra words!
Jan 31, 2023 @ 12:46:04
Yes and three lines made up of 45 syllables 💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:03:07
There is a sad bitterness, I think to her – you captured it.
Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:19:15
Thank you 💜💜
Jan 31, 2023 @ 22:28:15
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