Colleen Chesebro’#TankaTuesday #Ekphrastic #Poetry Challenge, 1/24/22, No. 304

WELCOME TO TANKA TUESDAY!

This week, using the painting as your inspiration, please write either a syllabic poetry form or a freestyle poem, including a syllabic form

Boughton, George Henry; The Lady of the Snows; Walker Art Gallery; http://www.artuk.org/artworks/the-lady-of-the-snows-97671

Your challenge for this week:

Is to write Ekphrastic poem.

The beautiful painting above has inspired me to write a Sijo. The Sijo, a Korean form believed to have first been used in the fourteenth century. It is similar in structure to various Japanese forms such as Haiku. As with many forms of poetry, the Sijo became a preferred poetry form of the yangban or ruling class as well as royalty. They were written in Chinese and were originally short songs set to music. The focus of the Sijo is usually nature and contemplation.

Three Lines 14-16 syllables per lineA total of 44-46 syllables for the entire poem.

Cold, cold, cold.

No weather so artic could out freeze her soul.
No snow blizzard could chill her more, her heart is like ice from winters depths.
Her countenance belies the hate she carries, heavy. The lady of the snows.

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THIS IS PART OF Colleen Tanka Tuesday wordcraft

40 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:19:02

    Love this!

    Reply

  2. robertawrites235681907
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:21:57

    Hi Willow, a fabulous poem. I also had rather dark thoughts invoked by this painting which is interesting. I have sent you an email.

    Reply

  3. Carol anne
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:26:42

    Very nice poem willow! ❤ ❤

    Reply

  4. Reena Saxena
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 16:54:38

    I like the cheekiness of this 🙂

    Reply

  5. jaquintinwriter
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 19:55:36

    Great use of the pictural prompt ~ like that you described the type of poem. 😊

    Reply

  6. memadtwo
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 21:14:28

    A woman best avoided! (K)

    Reply

  7. Gwen M. Plano
    Jan 24, 2023 @ 21:37:49

    Extraordinary poem, Willow. Beautifully expressed tension. Bravo.

    Reply

  8. msjadeli
    Jan 25, 2023 @ 03:05:48

    Winter can be like that. It feels personal.

    Reply

  9. balroop2013
    Jan 25, 2023 @ 17:39:30

    Sijo is a new form for me. It sounds good. Your interpretation is so different though. I admire where this painting took you, Willow.😊

    Reply

  10. Colleen M. Chesebro
    Jan 25, 2023 @ 19:25:52

    You picked up on a tension in the woman’s stance that’s no one else noticed. This is an excellent capture, Willow.

    Reply

  11. Jennie
    Jan 27, 2023 @ 11:55:37

    Well done!

    Reply

  12. yvettemcalleiro
    Jan 27, 2023 @ 22:31:14

    That was fantastic, Willow! I loved it!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

    Reply

  13. D.L. Finn, Author
    Jan 30, 2023 @ 03:13:05

    You captured her expression and seadon 🙂

    Reply

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  15. ben Alexander
    Jan 31, 2023 @ 06:45:27

    Wow, Willow, this is beautiful, but, GOSH, you went DARK! :-O


    David

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  16. D. Wallace Peach
    Jan 31, 2023 @ 12:16:19

    I love all the interpretations of this artwork, Willow, and you went to the dark side. Her expression is hard to read, which has left lots of room for creativity. Beautiful poem. Thanks for introducing me too the Sijo too!

    Reply

  17. Jules
    Jan 31, 2023 @ 18:03:07

    There is a sad bitterness, I think to her – you captured it.

    Reply

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