Challenge No. 303, 1/17/23WELCOME TO #TANKATUESDAY!短歌 火曜日
This week Colleen said:
“Did you know we have a haiku-like form that doesn’t use a kigo or kireji? It’s called a senryū. (I mostly use senryu, so you will see the word spelled both ways).
Senryū is a Japanese form similar to haiku: three lines with a s-l-s syllable count up to 17 syllables.” So Colleen has set us the task of writing a senryu or a set of senryu. Today I do not have much time so I am just writing one but it has my heart and soul in it.
My heart is pounding
Coursing blood does not warm me
Fear is primeval
willowdot21 
Jan 17, 2023 @ 09:51:22
excellent, and the fear is felt
Jan 17, 2023 @ 10:05:42
Thank you Beth 😘
Jan 17, 2023 @ 10:06:37
oy vey! I hope you’re okay, Willow ❤
~David
Jan 17, 2023 @ 10:08:46
Yes thank you David using feelings that are now subsideing 💜
Jan 17, 2023 @ 10:54:33
Put the fear in me!
Jan 17, 2023 @ 10:56:18
It’s horrible when your heart pounds and you go cold ! Thank you for reading Sis 💜
Jan 17, 2023 @ 11:06:48
💛💛💛
Jan 17, 2023 @ 15:17:51
Ohhh this is good, Willow. Lots of emotions in this spooky senryu. Well done!
Jan 17, 2023 @ 17:47:32
Thank you Colleen 💜
Jan 17, 2023 @ 17:16:39
You did really well with this poem.
Jan 17, 2023 @ 17:33:57
Thank you Robbie, I did try 💜
Jan 17, 2023 @ 21:15:19
Very impactful, Willow!
Jan 17, 2023 @ 21:33:00
Thank you 💜
Jan 17, 2023 @ 21:44:13
You’re welcome.
Jan 17, 2023 @ 22:16:09
Cheers 😚
Jan 18, 2023 @ 00:55:17
Wow! I felt this. You captured the reader into the scene. Brava!
Jan 18, 2023 @ 09:56:56
Thank you Eugenia it came from deep within 💜💜
Jan 18, 2023 @ 12:49:50
My pleasure, Willow. 💖
Jan 18, 2023 @ 13:19:18
Hugs 💜
Jan 19, 2023 @ 21:18:53
Brilliant ❤
Jan 19, 2023 @ 21:24:49
Thank you 💜
Jan 20, 2023 @ 01:35:00
You pulled me right in, Willow! Great poem!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
Jan 20, 2023 @ 09:18:03
That’s fear for you Yvette 💜
Jan 20, 2023 @ 03:30:59
Wow! Good one Willow. Like the artwork too.
Pat
Jan 20, 2023 @ 09:30:58
Thank you , the picture is from Pixabay 💜
Jan 21, 2023 @ 18:20:00
Fear is a scary emotion.
Jan 21, 2023 @ 18:22:11
Yes it is 💜💜
Jan 23, 2023 @ 14:08:26
Be well, Willow. All this WILL pass: let’s all slow down on the year of the rabbit. hop, hop.
Jan 23, 2023 @ 14:57:33
Wise words Selma , thank you 💜
Jan 29, 2023 @ 05:16:44
Love it.🖤
Jan 29, 2023 @ 09:16:37
Thank you 💜💜