Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge 432 APPLE and Pick.

Haiku Challenge

I cheated this week the syllable count is correct but the true elements are not there.

Apple juicy red
So tempting beckons Eve
Pick me, worlds crumble.


15 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:06:11

    Naughty, Sis! πŸ˜‰


  2. Chel Owens
    Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:15:50

    Sounds about right, though I often wonder if it really was an apple.


    • willowdot21
      Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:21:01

      I agree, I guess the apple is easier to understand than the “fruit of the tree of wisdom” … whatever it was it unleashed Mayhem! Be safe πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ


  3. robertawrites235681907
    Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:36:59

    I think this is a really good haiku, Willow. Rules are made to be broken.


  4. M
    Oct 18, 2022 @ 08:49:36

    Think of it like this, you ALREADY ALWAYS break the rules because you are writing it in English.


  5. judeitakali
    Oct 19, 2022 @ 11:10:32

    cheaters never prosper is one of my childhood’s unvindicated sayings, lol.


  6. Dan Antion
    Oct 24, 2022 @ 18:17:28

    I like it. You know what they say about rules πŸ˜‰


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