18 Oct 2022 15 Comments
in #Haiku, #Senryu, #Haiga, #Tanka, #Tanka Prose, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose, #CinquainPoetry, #Etheree, #Nonet, #Shadorma, #Gogyoka, Autumn, loss, Poems, Ronovanwrites, sadness, Stories Tags: Apple, Japanese poetry, Pick
I cheated this week the syllable count is correct but the true elements are not there.
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Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:06:11
Naughty, Sis! 😉
Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:15:25
Yup a big cheat, hugs 💜💜💜
Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:31:00
🤗🤗🤗
Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:15:50
Sounds about right, though I often wonder if it really was an apple.
Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:21:01
I agree, I guess the apple is easier to understand than the “fruit of the tree of wisdom” … whatever it was it unleashed Mayhem! Be safe 💜💜💜
Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:36:59
I think this is a really good haiku, Willow. Rules are made to be broken.
Oct 18, 2022 @ 04:49:15
Thank you Robbie 💜😘
Oct 18, 2022 @ 08:49:36
Think of it like this, you ALREADY ALWAYS break the rules because you are writing it in English.
Oct 18, 2022 @ 11:09:45
Lol 🤣🤣🤣 of course ….never thought of that !
Oct 19, 2022 @ 11:10:32
cheaters never prosper is one of my childhood’s unvindicated sayings, lol.
Oct 19, 2022 @ 11:19:52
Oops …..I am without hope then 💜💜
Oct 19, 2022 @ 12:59:49
In real life, they do prosper. a very grey area between working smart and cheating if you ask me.
Oct 19, 2022 @ 18:15:30
Yes indeed 💜
Oct 24, 2022 @ 18:17:28
I like it. You know what they say about rules 😉
Oct 24, 2022 @ 18:56:48
Yes indeed I do 💜