
Colleen has been on a well deserved holiday but now she is back with our first prompt of July. This week, we choose our own syllabic form and a color to feature in our syllabic poem. But, Colleen said “let’s add a little something else to make it special! This week, along with a color, add some weather to your poem. “
If the form is from the #TankaTuesday cheat sheet, let us know so we know where to look for directions. If it’s a new form, share how to write it and where you found the instructions. Think about the different ways you can use color in a poem.
I have chosen the colour red and rain. I have written a Sijo.
The Sijo, a Korean form believed to have first been used in the fourteenth century. It is similar in structure to various Japanese forms such as Haiku. As with many forms of poetry, the Sijo became a preferred poetry form of the yangban or ruling class as well as royalty. They were written in Chinese and were originally short songs set to music. The focus of the Sijo is usually nature and contemplation. We’ll try that to begin with.
There are:
Three Lines
14-16 syllables per line
A total of 44-46 syllables for the entire poem.
To know how many syllables in a particular word try HowManySyllables.com.
Lost Choice
Dark shades block out colours, rain falls, mother earth weeps in shock.
Red dress and cloak, female beauty hidden. Choice ripped away.
Rain falls in torrents it cannot wash away the sins of the world.
Jul 05, 2022 @ 17:36:01
Love it! 💛💛
Jul 05, 2022 @ 17:36:16
Thank you Sis 💜
Jul 05, 2022 @ 23:18:18
Very nice, Willow. Nothing can wash away these stains.
Jul 06, 2022 @ 04:51:33
No Dan I believe you are right 💜🌹
Jul 06, 2022 @ 00:17:55
Very nice. And so, so appropriate for the world today.
Jul 06, 2022 @ 04:46:56
Thank you I know it’s depressing but that’s how things seem right now 🌹💜
Jul 06, 2022 @ 02:05:43
Disturbing but well done!
Jul 06, 2022 @ 04:48:08
Yes it is disturbing, as long as it is not a certainty we still have hope.💜💜
Jul 06, 2022 @ 08:04:47
True 🧡🧡
Jul 06, 2022 @ 10:59:15
🤞🤞🤞
Jul 07, 2022 @ 18:32:58
Yeah, disturbing is exactly right, Dale…
😦
David
Jul 07, 2022 @ 17:46:06
Thank you David it’s very scary isn’t it 💜
Jul 07, 2022 @ 17:57:01
🙂
Jul 07, 2022 @ 19:23:36
💜
Jul 07, 2022 @ 21:32:36
🧡
Jul 07, 2022 @ 21:34:59
😊☀️💜
Jul 06, 2022 @ 03:58:14
Very nice job Willow
Jul 06, 2022 @ 04:42:30
Thank you Lauren 💜
Jul 06, 2022 @ 08:45:27
Very topical and on point. Love this, Willow 💕🙂
Jul 06, 2022 @ 09:00:28
Thank you Harmony, it’s very scary isn’t it 💜
Jul 06, 2022 @ 09:07:05
It sure is! 💖
Jul 06, 2022 @ 16:45:57
“Cannot wash away the sins of the world.” great line
Jul 06, 2022 @ 17:08:06
Such a sad turn of events 💜💜💜💜
Jul 06, 2022 @ 19:14:06
Yes!
Jul 07, 2022 @ 10:21:09
That was powerful, Willow! Well done! 🙂
Jul 07, 2022 @ 11:40:11
Thank you I am afraid 💜💜
Jul 07, 2022 @ 14:40:22
This is excellent, Willow. I’m still in shock! We are all afraid. What do you do with a congress that can’t act and a Supreme Court that is now ruling against the will of the people? I saw Boris resigned today. I pray for both of our countries as we all struggle to find our way in this ever changing world. ❤
Jul 07, 2022 @ 15:33:33
Thank you Colleen it’s all very frightening isn’t it sending love 💜💜
Jul 07, 2022 @ 16:41:00
Thanks, Willow. Yes, it’s all frightening! Sending you love and hugs right back! ❤
Jul 07, 2022 @ 16:44:12
Thank you 💜
Jul 08, 2022 @ 05:19:20
Wonderful emotion in this, Willow. X
Jul 08, 2022 @ 08:29:05
Thank you Marje💜
Jul 09, 2022 @ 06:50:50
Pleasure, dear Willow. ❤ x
Jul 09, 2022 @ 07:05:24
This is beautiful and scary at the same time!
Jul 09, 2022 @ 13:24:43
Thank you 💜 it is scary !
Jul 09, 2022 @ 07:24:57
Absolutely love the depth. very evocative.
Jul 09, 2022 @ 07:37:42
Thank you I try 💜
Jul 09, 2022 @ 20:30:10
It’s frightening indeed…what will be next? (K)
Jul 10, 2022 @ 11:49:06
I dread to think 💜💜
Jul 11, 2022 @ 10:39:57
Powerful but scary Willow.. beautifully expressed.. ♥
Jul 11, 2022 @ 10:42:07
Thank you Colleen I fear the way the US. is going it might come to this 💜
Jul 11, 2022 @ 19:57:36
I can see why you thought that about the color red and the quote from which I took the title. OMG. I hadn’t read your post. It’s a beautiful song and well done. Your poem echoes the strong emotion of the song wonderfully.
Jul 11, 2022 @ 20:01:04
Thank you Marsha it was a response to
Jul 11, 2022 @ 20:02:38
Sorry sent too soon. I wrote it in response to Roe and Wade and abortion laws in America. 💜
Jul 11, 2022 @ 22:37:58
I figured that out after watching the video and reading the comments.
Jul 12, 2022 @ 16:44:44
Hi Willow, it is ironic that I should read this poem while Baby one more time by Britney Spears plays in the background.
Jul 12, 2022 @ 17:02:26
Yes indeed Robbie I agree that is really ironic 💜💜
Jul 21, 2022 @ 23:53:13
this was beautifully written
Jul 22, 2022 @ 03:31:39
Thank you,