This week I have chosen a Tanka for Ronovanwrite’s Weekly Haiku Challenge.
Swifts
come September Swifts
dancing in the sky leave home
set for hotter climes
weaving patterns of farewell
my heart weeps and waves.
Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge 361 HOME and Weep.
08 Jun 2021 14 Comments
in #Haiku, #Senryu, #Haiga, #Tanka, #Tanka Prose, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose, #CinquainPoetry, #Etheree, #Nonet, #Shadorma, #Gogyoka, loss, Poems, Ronovanwrites Tags: farewell, home, journey, Migration, Swifts, Weep
willowdot21 
Jun 08, 2021 @ 09:43:42
Love your take, Sis 💜
Jun 08, 2021 @ 09:28:10
Thank you Sis I love to watch them getting ready to leave for Africa 💜
Jun 08, 2021 @ 11:23:22
Lovely, Willow!
Jun 08, 2021 @ 16:24:33
Thank you 💜
Jun 08, 2021 @ 14:15:06
Beautiful and bittersweet tanka, Willow. 🙂
Jun 08, 2021 @ 16:21:49
Thank you so much 💜
Jun 08, 2021 @ 15:16:31
This is a great take, Willow.
Jun 08, 2021 @ 16:21:01
Thank you 💜😊
Jun 08, 2021 @ 19:36:42
But then you get to look forward to their return and that’s what makes them special 🙂
Lovely, Willow.
Jun 09, 2021 @ 06:26:00
They are special, beautiful tiny creatures travelling thousands of miles twice a year for all their lives.💜
Jun 09, 2021 @ 14:04:02
Nature is amazing, isn’t it? 🧡
Jun 09, 2021 @ 14:35:46
She never ceases to amaze 💜
Jun 08, 2021 @ 19:57:44
I really like that!
Jun 09, 2021 @ 06:24:19
Thank you,I love to see them swirling around 💜