
Hi its Tuesday and time for Colleen’s Tuesday Tanka Challenge. It is the first Challenge of the month so it is poets choice, so we can pick any form of poetry we fancy. Colleen has found us yet another form of poetry called an Abhanga. I have chosen to try the new form as I love a challenge. I chose also to write two stanzas. Below is how it works.
Abhanga, “the completion” is a stanzaic form commonly used for devotional poetic composition, although it has also been used for cynicism, satire and reflective moods. It was popular from the 13th thru 17th centuries Marathi Region of India and is described as complex and classic. (poetrymagnumopus.com)
The elements of the Abhanga are:
- stanzaic, written in any number of 4 line stanzas.
- syllabic, 6-6-6-4 syllables each
- rhymed L2 and L3 rhyme. Often internal rhyme is employed. End rhyme scheme x a a x , x being unrhymed.
Eyes and Souls

Look deep into the soul
The eyes are the portal
To a soul immortal
Answers to find.

Lacrimosa relief
Tears are a safety valve
They are a gentle salve
Shed tears save pain.
Feb 02, 2021 @ 15:53:43
Fantastic!
Feb 02, 2021 @ 16:25:09
Thank you 💜
Feb 02, 2021 @ 16:28:54
That first one.. fantastic, Sis! ❤
Feb 02, 2021 @ 16:38:19
Thank you Sis
Feb 06, 2021 @ 17:34:43
Oh, I loved your Abhanga poetry, Willow. It’s fun to have some rhyming choices. Well done. ❤
Feb 06, 2021 @ 18:02:26
Thank you Colleen it was fun to try 💜
Feb 06, 2021 @ 19:15:41
I like reading them out loud. They have such a nice sound.
Feb 06, 2021 @ 19:16:36
Woo! Thank you for the push to try them💜
Feb 06, 2021 @ 23:19:57
Well done! I like this.
Pat
Feb 06, 2021 @ 23:42:33
Thank you Pat 💜💜
Feb 07, 2021 @ 07:08:56
Well done Willow, two of the new form both nicely done. x
Feb 07, 2021 @ 07:19:36
It always challenging trying Colleen’s new form 💜💜
Feb 08, 2021 @ 07:39:17
Both are stunning Willow ♥
Feb 08, 2021 @ 11:24:42
Thank you 💜💜
Feb 08, 2021 @ 12:07:23
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