#JusJoJan prompt the 8th – “Twisted” Poetry.

08 Jan 2021 19 Comments

by willowdot21 in #Haiku, #Senryu, #Haiga, #Tanka, #Tanka Prose, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose, #CinquainPoetry, #Etheree, #Nonet, #Shadorma, #Gogyoka, JusJoJan, Just jot it January Tags: Immortality, JusJoJan, LindaGHill, savage love, Twisted, Vampires

Twisted Love

Twisted is the love that enslaves

Bitter the lips that bite and gnaw.

Blood filled the path that leads to our graves.

Dark the blemish that hides the flaw.

I can never set you free.

For a thousand, thousand year you are bound to me.

Thank is part of LindaGHill’s Jusjojan.

19 Comments (+add yours?)

Ritu
Jan 08, 2021 @ 17:14:04

Great job, Sis!!

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- willowdot21
  Jan 08, 2021 @ 18:03:45
  
  Thank you Sis 💜
  
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Jane Dougherty
Jan 08, 2021 @ 19:36:21

‘Dark the blemish that hides the flaw’ That is such a good line!

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- willowdot21
  Jan 08, 2021 @ 19:39:25
  
  Thank you Jane I was rather proud of that 💜
  
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  - Jane Dougherty
    Jan 08, 2021 @ 19:44:15
    
    And rightly so!
- Dale
  Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:10:36
  
  I thought that line fabulous, too!
  
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  - willowdot21
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:41:04
    
    Well thank you Mam 💜💜💜💜
  - Jane Dougherty
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 19:00:47
    
    It flows so well, the sound of it.
  - willowdot21
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 20:02:05
    
    Thank you 💜
  - Jane Dougherty
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 20:02:39
    
    My pleasure 🙂
  - Dale
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 21:09:57
    
    Could not agree more.
  - willowdot21
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 22:24:56
    
    Thank you 💜
  - Dale
    Jan 09, 2021 @ 23:42:06
    
    🧡
-Eugenia
Jan 09, 2021 @ 13:22:23

Beautifully penned, Willow!

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- willowdot21
  Jan 09, 2021 @ 15:57:46
  
  Thank you Eugenia💜
  
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  - -Eugenia
    Jan 10, 2021 @ 15:30:28
    
    Most welcome, Willow!
  - willowdot21
    Jan 10, 2021 @ 15:48:02
    
    💜💜
Dale
Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:10:50

Wonderful!

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- willowdot21
  Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:41:35
  
  💜💜💜
  
  Reply

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