Twisted Love
Twisted is the love that enslaves
Bitter the lips that bite and gnaw.
Blood filled the path that leads to our graves.
Dark the blemish that hides the flaw.
I can never set you free.
For a thousand, thousand year you are bound to me.
#JusJoJan prompt the 8th – “Twisted” Poetry.
08 Jan 2021 19 Comments
in #Haiku, #Senryu, #Haiga, #Tanka, #Tanka Prose, #micropoetry, #poetry, #5lines, #Haibun, #Prose, #CinquainPoetry, #Etheree, #Nonet, #Shadorma, #Gogyoka, JusJoJan, Just jot it January Tags: Immortality, JusJoJan, LindaGHill, savage love, Twisted, Vampires
Jan 08, 2021 @ 17:14:04
Great job, Sis!!
Jan 08, 2021 @ 18:03:45
Thank you Sis 💜
Jan 08, 2021 @ 19:36:21
‘Dark the blemish that hides the flaw’ That is such a good line!
Jan 08, 2021 @ 19:39:25
Thank you Jane I was rather proud of that 💜
Jan 08, 2021 @ 19:44:15
And rightly so!
Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:10:36
I thought that line fabulous, too!
Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:41:04
Well thank you Mam 💜💜💜💜
Jan 09, 2021 @ 19:00:47
It flows so well, the sound of it.
Jan 09, 2021 @ 20:02:05
Thank you 💜
Jan 09, 2021 @ 20:02:39
My pleasure 🙂
Jan 09, 2021 @ 21:09:57
Could not agree more.
Jan 09, 2021 @ 22:24:56
Thank you 💜
Jan 09, 2021 @ 23:42:06
🧡
Jan 09, 2021 @ 13:22:23
Beautifully penned, Willow!
Jan 09, 2021 @ 15:57:46
Thank you Eugenia💜
Jan 10, 2021 @ 15:30:28
Most welcome, Willow!
Jan 10, 2021 @ 15:48:02
💜💜
Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:10:50
Wonderful!
Jan 09, 2021 @ 16:41:35
💜💜💜