Colleen said : “If you want to be creative and feel up to an additional challenge, respond to my renga with your own two, seven-syllable lines. A renga is a cooperative poem, written by two or more poets.”
Colleen has written the hokku (haiku portion in 5/7/5). Our response to her hokku is the wakiku: two seven-syllable lines that connect with the interaction between the different links.
Remember,our renga stanza will link and shift. It will NOT tell a sequential story. Review the renga on the cheatsheet link on her page to refresh your memory.
Here is Colleen’s hokku: followed by my Waikiki.

hazy reflectionsβ crows gather to remember the gifts of summer. Seasons whisper to the deer. Gently as they ride with crows
This is Part of Colleen Chesebro’s Tuesday Challenge.

Dec 15, 2020 @ 13:48:19
Very good, sis! π₯°
Dec 15, 2020 @ 13:49:49
Thank you Sisπ
Dec 15, 2020 @ 19:21:24
Well done, Willow, for taking this challenge on! I love it! β€
Dec 15, 2020 @ 19:28:43
Thank you Colleen π
Dec 15, 2020 @ 22:29:51
Beautiful reflection of her poem, Willow. π
Dec 16, 2020 @ 00:38:54
Thank you Marsha ππ
Dec 16, 2020 @ 11:41:24
Beautiful completion of the renga
Dec 16, 2020 @ 12:30:32
Thank you jude
Dec 16, 2020 @ 15:58:24
A pleasure πΌπ
Dec 19, 2020 @ 17:45:48
I love your wakiku, Willow. How beautiful. That was a fun challenge. π
Dec 19, 2020 @ 17:50:51
Thank you I really did enjoy collaboration π
Dec 19, 2020 @ 18:42:05
It’s got me thinking about how to foster more collaborations on my blog too. Something to think about. π
Dec 19, 2020 @ 18:54:36
Yes it’s always a treat to collaborate with like minded. π
Dec 21, 2020 @ 07:24:31
Thank you Colleen π