Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge Prompt No. 34: (STABLE) in the D rhyme line.

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It is time for Ronovanwrite’s Décima Challenge and this week it’s the word Stable in the D line. As ever we may, make some kind of link between the Haiku Challenge prompt of Grace and Slip which again I chose to do.

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Banished

What evil caused the fall from grace
What caused the fight that banished those
And shut the doors of heaven closed.
Evicted, slipped to earth disgraced.
They were no longer pure or chased.
They lost their wings, they lost their souls.
Still immortal, yet no more whole.
Heaven rent in two, un stable
The bloody war, truth no fable.
The vanquished lost their holy place.

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36 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. floridaborne
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 00:40:49

    Chaste. I always thought that chastity was overrated and would certainly rather be chased. At my age, as my father would say, “that ain’t gonna happen” 🙂

    I love the concept of your poem and the message. It seems that many of the poems, including mine, chose the word fable to go with stable. It seems to be a message hidden within the rhyme.

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  2. Frank Hubeny
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 00:53:10

    I like this line: “Still immortal, yet no more whole.”

    Reply

  3. andy1076
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 01:18:59

    Powerful words, as it is in all your writing…!

    Reply

  4. Ritu
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 05:26:45

    Ooh, this is very good, sis!

    Reply

  5. poetryofemotions5778
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 20:35:06

    Wonderful words!!✨

    Reply

  6. Chel Owens
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 23:10:28

    Excellent, Willow.

    Reply

  7. Dale
    Dec 04, 2020 @ 23:22:21

    I really like this one, Willow! Chastity is highly overrated 😉

    Reply

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