Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge Prompt No. 33: (BLIND) in the C rhyme line.

Welcome to the Décima Poetry Challenge. Each week we’ll be attempting a Décima, also known as an Espinela, poem.

If you don’t know how to write a Décima, click HERE to go to a post on How to Write an Espinela or Décima Poem.

Ronovan Writes Decima Challenge Image

You may, if you wish, make some kind of link between the Haiku Challenge prompt of (LIFE and View). and BLIND.

Ronovanwrite’s says the two challenges are separate but can be combined if choose to do so. I choose to combine, my Haiku and Décima.

Eyes tight closed to hide from the truth.
No worse lies than those to one’s self.
It’s detrimental to your health.
It’s the opinion of youth.
Answers second, after the boot.
Life often leaves us lost and blind.
Making our thoughts the jaundiced kind.
There’s nought, worse than self deception.
Spreading like a mass infection.
There’s no silver lining to find.

Part of Ronovanwrite’s Décima Challenge.

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 20:14:28

    Great job, sis! I tried this week two. It’s publishing tomorrow. Decimas are hard!!!
    💜💜

    Reply

  2. Betty Hayes Albright
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 21:11:39

    I really like this, Willow — words of truth and wisdom!
    How’re you doing? I’ll be thinking of you on the 27th. ❤❤❤

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Nov 25, 2020 @ 21:47:03

      Hi Betty so glad you liked the décima, thank you for remembering my I , I am all set to go in Friday morning, it can’t come quick enough 💜💜💜

      Reply

      • Betty Hayes Albright
        Nov 25, 2020 @ 22:03:03

        So glad you’re still scheduled! I really will be thinking of you. Friday morning for you will be bedtime Thursday night for me. Will be sending good thoughts to you! 💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕💕

      • willowdot21
        Nov 25, 2020 @ 22:11:52

        Thank you all good thoughts appreciate 😊💜😊💓💓💓💓💓💓💓 ee

  3. Frank Hubeny
    Nov 25, 2020 @ 21:26:15

    Good observation: “There’s nought, worse than self deception.”

    Reply

  4. Abubaker Jandan
    Nov 26, 2020 @ 00:58:43

    A beautiful post thank you so much

    Reply

  5. darsword
    Nov 26, 2020 @ 19:10:27

    Well done! In a few weeks I am going to start trying this. You make it sound easy-breezy but I know you work hard to make it sound so good.

    Thinking about you a lot for tomorrow. 💜💜💜💜💜🤗🤗🤗🙏🙏🙏

    Reply

  6. revivedwriter
    Nov 29, 2020 @ 01:07:12

    I really like the comparison of jaundice to some thoughts that we have when we are “lost and blind.”

    Reply

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