This is part of Ronovanwrite’s Décima poetry
Ronovan Writes Décima Poetry Challenge Prompt No. 22 (BLEND) This week, it’s the A rhyme line. I have combined yesterday’s Haiku prompt, cup and sip.
Welcome to the Décima Poetry Challenge. Each week we’ll be attempting a Décima, also known as an Espinela, poem.
You and I, an eclectic blend
Take our essence inhale and sip
Your fingers make my senses flip
Gently aroused my desires bend
To your will, I crave the end
Erotic juices running free
Lips cup places they shouldn’t be
Every inch of our bodies steam
Climaxing as one we both scream
Bodies electric,our souls free.
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Sep 10, 2020 @ 04:21:51
Ooh! Well done, sis!!!
Sep 10, 2020 @ 05:22:09
Thank you Sis this was a hard one as I had set the pace with the Haiku.
Sep 10, 2020 @ 14:39:29
🥰
Sep 10, 2020 @ 19:46:14
🤭
Sep 10, 2020 @ 05:04:25
This is such a wonderful line, Willow. “Your fingers make my senses flip”
Sep 10, 2020 @ 05:20:22
Well it fits the meter but it’s not very poetic, I am glad you like it thank you💜 .
Sep 10, 2020 @ 22:14:49
I liked it because it was a modern note in a classical form. It also described how it feels to be touched by someone you love.
Sep 11, 2020 @ 05:22:05
Thank you Robert it’s a poem of love💜
Sep 11, 2020 @ 06:59:06
That’s exactly what I got from it.
Sep 11, 2020 @ 07:20:35
Thank you just what I wanted to convey💜
Sep 11, 2020 @ 07:24:19
It’s always nice when someone gets the intention. 🙂
Sep 11, 2020 @ 07:27:04
I do agree, our words are so often misconstrued 💜
Sep 10, 2020 @ 07:08:22
Sensuous …
Sep 10, 2020 @ 07:09:05
Thank you 💜
Sep 10, 2020 @ 10:00:01
Ooh la la!
Sep 10, 2020 @ 10:00:58
Indeed, Ooh! La La 💜
Sep 10, 2020 @ 15:28:57
I like how an “eclectic blend” can get together.
Sep 10, 2020 @ 16:57:50
They say opposites attract 💜
Sep 11, 2020 @ 06:55:54
Wow, this is very “hot” and “heavy”. I don’t know if I could write something like this.
Sep 11, 2020 @ 07:26:16
Poetry is different to prose written about, love,sex, passion and feeling should be no different to any other emotions. Yet it is isn’t it. Poetry is easier because it’s lyrical . I am sure you could if you needed to Robbie 💜
Sep 13, 2020 @ 14:24:44
You’re a brilliant writer. Thanks for writing and for encouragement with your kind comments. I’ve nominated you for an award. Please read why..
https://mindfills.wordpress.com/2020/09/13/the-sunshine-blogger-award/
Sep 15, 2020 @ 05:39:20
Thank you Ron 💜