#Haikai Challenge #149 (7/25/20): Waterfall (taki) #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #haiga #renga

This is my first visit to Frank Tassone’s Haiku Challenge. I have written a Tanka about how waterfalls affect my soul.


Β© willowdot21

Sparkling silver bright

Hidden from mind all danger

The urge to be free

Takes me through crystal waters

Drowning my soul in freedom.

30 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Jul 27, 2020 @ 07:53:06

    Beautiful, Sis πŸ₯°


  2. Priscilla Bettis
    Jul 27, 2020 @ 08:24:16

    Lovely little waterfall and poem to go with it.


  3. kimbladeswritingblog
    Jul 27, 2020 @ 11:14:28

    Hi Willow. This is a lovely poem. Distinct imagery in every line.


  4. Jane Dougherty
    Jul 27, 2020 @ 14:51:25

    Lovely hymn to freedom!


  5. Jane Dougherty
    Jul 27, 2020 @ 14:52:45

    Lovely thoughts, Willow πŸ™‚


  6. Lisa Coleman
    Jul 28, 2020 @ 01:26:52

    Love it! πŸ’™


  7. robertawrites235681907
    Jul 28, 2020 @ 02:59:45

    This is very beautiful, Willow.


  8. Frank J. Tassone
    Jul 29, 2020 @ 17:14:33

    Beautifully evocative! Thank you for sharing! πŸ™‚


  9. Frank J. Tassone
    Jul 29, 2020 @ 19:15:15

    Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
    #Haiku Happenings #8: Willow’s latest #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge!


  10. Trackback: #Haikai Challenge #150 (8/2/20): Sturgeon Moon #haiku #senryu #haibun #tanka #haiga #renga – Frank J. Tassone
  11. -Eugenia
    Aug 02, 2020 @ 17:07:36

    Beautifully penned, Willow!


  12. msjadeli
    Aug 02, 2020 @ 17:19:32

    There is something healing about the sound of falling water. So cool to include a video!


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