This is my first visit to Frank Tassone’s Haiku Challenge. I have written a Tanka about how waterfalls affect my soul.
Waterfall
Sparkling silver bright
Hidden from mind all danger
The urge to be free
Takes me through crystal waters
Drowning my soul in freedom.
Jul 27, 2020 @ 07:53:06
Beautiful, Sis π₯°
Jul 27, 2020 @ 07:56:14
Thank you Sis ππ
Jul 27, 2020 @ 08:24:16
Lovely little waterfall and poem to go with it.
Jul 27, 2020 @ 08:55:08
Thank you, the waterfall is in some woods near where we live π
Jul 27, 2020 @ 11:14:28
Hi Willow. This is a lovely poem. Distinct imagery in every line.
Jul 27, 2020 @ 11:17:27
Thank you Kim , I do love streams and waterfalls of all sizes π
Jul 27, 2020 @ 14:51:25
Lovely hymn to freedom!
Jul 27, 2020 @ 15:03:01
Thank you Jane wishful thinking at the moment π π
Jul 27, 2020 @ 15:05:22
I know what you mean π
Jul 27, 2020 @ 15:17:37
Hopefully not forever π
Jul 27, 2020 @ 15:27:06
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Jul 27, 2020 @ 14:52:45
Lovely thoughts, Willow π
Jul 27, 2020 @ 15:03:36
Thank you π
Jul 28, 2020 @ 01:26:52
Love it! π
Jul 28, 2020 @ 05:35:16
Thank you
Jul 28, 2020 @ 02:59:45
This is very beautiful, Willow.
Jul 28, 2020 @ 05:33:34
Thank you Robbie π
Jul 29, 2020 @ 17:14:33
Beautifully evocative! Thank you for sharing! π
Jul 29, 2020 @ 17:34:02
I enjoyed joining in ππΉ
Jul 29, 2020 @ 19:15:15
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #8: Willowβs latest #tanka for my current #Haikai Challenge!
Jul 29, 2020 @ 17:34:40
Thank you very much π
Jul 29, 2020 @ 22:42:54
My pleasure π
Aug 02, 2020 @ 20:06:41
Thank you π
Aug 02, 2020 @ 17:07:36
Beautifully penned, Willow!
Aug 02, 2020 @ 19:59:07
Thank you i
Aug 02, 2020 @ 17:19:32
There is something healing about the sound of falling water. So cool to include a video!
Aug 02, 2020 @ 19:57:19
Thank you glad you enjoyed it π
Aug 02, 2020 @ 20:08:37
You are welcome, Willow π
Aug 02, 2020 @ 20:23:48
Thank you again