Mary and Jo part 1

To day is the first day of Advent, leading up to Christmas. I would like to re-run my take on the Nativity story. I first wrote this in 2011, in the style of prosetry.

Jo and  Mares had to go it was a government decree. So they packed their things as they could not disagree. It took then longer than Jo hand planned and they could not find a room to stay so finally they pulled up outside “The Grand” Hotel on Blue Jay Way.
It wasn’t in their price range but nowhere had any rooms. Jo hoped Mares’ smile would swing it plus the fact she was in full bloom.He helped her off the scooter and followed her inside. Jo found a seat for Mares, the girl at the desk smiled,and sighed. Fingers crossed behind his back Jo approached the desk his best smile ready he asked if they had somewhere Mares could rest. The look upon the receptionists face was pleasant but she had no space.

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Mares was so very tired in fact she fell asleep. Jo ask if they had somewhere that she could have a proper rest.The lady at the desk still did not relent. Then the security man said there was his room, for Jo that was heaven sent .

6 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Dec 01, 2019 @ 11:16:29

    Yay for Jo and Mares;

    Reply

  2. robertawrites235681907
    Dec 01, 2019 @ 15:47:18

    A great start, Willow

    Reply

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