08 Oct 2019 8 Comments
in Colleen's Tuesday Tanka, Poems Tags: Ben Naga, Colleen's Weekly, Comment Reblog, Empty & Space, Poetry Challenge, Tanka, Tuesday
DESTITUTE
Goes to bed hungry
Probes the gap between her
teeth
But there nothing there
{Empty (hungry) Space (gap)}
This is from the talented pen of Ben Naga
It’s so good I am entering it on hi behalf to Colleen’s Tuesday Tanka Challenge.
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Oct 08, 2019 @ 22:39:43
(Blushes demurely though genuinely touched and grateful.) Thank you.
Oct 08, 2019 @ 22:44:41
It is a perfect use of the prompt and so skillful 💜
Oct 08, 2019 @ 22:48:27
If only it helped feed the starving. 😦
Oct 08, 2019 @ 22:51:07
Yes if only 😟
Oct 09, 2019 @ 03:32:40
This is very clever, Willow. A great share.
Oct 09, 2019 @ 06:30:48
Yes Ben is very talented 💜
Oct 09, 2019 @ 04:32:00
💜🤗
Oct 09, 2019 @ 08:35:52
Thank you.