08 Sep 2019 9 Comments
in Depression, Poems Tags: Cinqku, death, Depression, Drowning
Drowning
Nothing left
To struggle for
Such a relief , escape
Freedom.
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A cinqku must always have 5 lines and a perfect seventeen-syllable count. The lines typically follow a 2,3,4,6,2 format. There is no title requirement on the second line. As for syntax and diction styles, it follows the free Tanka style originally. There are no metric requirements for a cinqku poem. Additionally, the final line must contain a cinquain or kireji turn for emphasis.
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Sep 08, 2019 @ 18:56:06
So sad 😢💜
Sep 08, 2019 @ 19:01:53
Yes it is when people think that is their only way out 💜
Sep 08, 2019 @ 19:11:59
😢😢😢
Sep 08, 2019 @ 19:13:34
Sad story, especially suicide.
Sep 08, 2019 @ 21:42:55
Yes it very sad but it is a common occurrence 💜
Sep 09, 2019 @ 14:57:54
Wonderful – made me think of Shakespeare’s Ophelia.
Sep 09, 2019 @ 15:40:37
Thank Noelle 💜💜
Sep 09, 2019 @ 17:48:12
I also though of Ophelia.
Sep 10, 2019 @ 07:53:15
Yes I can see the similarity too 💜💜