I’m a fret work,patchwork, lost soul of a girl.
I’m a pigtail, full bangs short skirt thrown into a whirl.
I am a big bust, tight arsed see through boiling pot of lust!
I am a thigh high patent leather boots of “come on”..now don’t feign disgust!
I am a black eyed, raggy dress, sexy legs in stripy socks.
Purple lips, curvy hips legs akimbo over the back of a chair throw my head back brush your chest with my hair.
Bend down, turn around suck my thumb roll my eyes lick your thighs…. now don’t pretend you wouldn’t.
I am a diamond encrusted dog collar, peekaboo bra, black leather cat, suit red stiletto heels making your senses reel.
Hard swelling, tightening clothes hastily ripped off knickers on the floor, against the door or try the desk …. now don’t feign disgust… now don’t pretend you wouldn’t.
I am a cheap chick, turn a trick, trip your wick, bother booted swift kick dancing down the fireman’s pole, digging deep into a hole.
Express train through the tunnel, danger spider web funnel.
Come hither don’t dither hurry up before it withers I cant wait all night are you looking for a fight….. I can do that too,especially for you. …. now don’t feign disgust… now don’t pretend you wouldn’t.
Jul 20, 2019 @ 06:45:10
Fantastic poem Willow. ❤ x
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:48:10
Thank you Marje it a really old one.💜
Jul 21, 2019 @ 07:51:01
❤
Jul 20, 2019 @ 07:12:04
Wow! This is good, Willow. I think it might be the best piece of yours I’ve read!
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:46:35
It’s a really old one that I decided to republish. Glad to hear you liked it 😉💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 10:54:22
I do. It packs a punch and a real message.
Jul 20, 2019 @ 07:12:57
I absolutely loved your opening verse. It said everything I needed to know about what this poem was going to be about. In today’s parlance (yes, I am that old-fashioned) —you nailed it! But I think the two other verses were overlong and because of that, you lost the cadence of the first verse. Nevertheless, you have admirable talent. Thank you for posting this.
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:45:11
I agree this is a very old poem of mine that I decided to republish and what you say is bang on. Hopefully my writing has improved since then 💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 07:15:07
Ooohh… you wouldn’t, would you? (I think you would…)
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:42:46
Yes indeed 😉🤣🤣
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:04:33
Wow, Sis!
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:49:28
😉💜💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:59:58
That was stunning 🥰
Jul 20, 2019 @ 09:33:46
Thank you Sis 💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:37:49
Wow, I am bowled over by this, Teagan. It is magnificent.
Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:49:16
This is me willow , if your talking about Puppet. It’s an old one of mine 💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 09:26:35
Blooming Wow! Willow if you tweaked the length of a couple of verses this would be your best piece. At least the best I have read. The movement, the beat, took me along the verses at speed. Your pace is excellent. So pleased I came today.
Jul 20, 2019 @ 09:31:07
Thank you Ellen your not the first to point out the verse length, and I do agree with you and everyone else. This is a really old one of mine …I agree it needs culling but it is a baby of mine. I am totally chuffed that it has been received so well.💜💜💜😉
Jul 20, 2019 @ 09:37:32
Not Cull! it just needs a tweak. Look how much you have learned you can perfect this.
Jul 20, 2019 @ 09:45:10
I shall have a go 💜 thanks 💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:35:17
Wow! I’m with Jane! This was fantastic!
🧡💜🧡💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:19:19
Thank you it a very old one of mine 💜💜💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:20:15
It is truly good. Glad you shook it out of the cobwebs
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:21:47
Yes I am too, it’s gone down rather well 💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:27:31
As these wonderful comments can attest…
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:30:21
I am so grateful ,💜
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:41:04
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Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:46:22
Nice piece. 🙂
Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:17:05
Thank you 💜