I’m a fret work,patchwork, lost soul of a girl.
I’m a pigtail, full bangs short skirt thrown into a whirl.
I am a big bust, tight arsed see through boiling pot of lust!
I am a thigh high patent leather boots of “come on”..now don’t feign disgust!

I am a black eyed, raggy dress, sexy legs in stripy socks.
Purple lips, curvy hips legs akimbo over the back of a chair throw my head back brush your chest with my hair.
Bend down, turn around suck my thumb roll my eyes lick your thighs…. now don’t pretend you wouldn’t.
I am a diamond encrusted dog collar, peekaboo bra, black leather cat, suit red stiletto heels making your senses reel.

Hard swelling, tightening clothes hastily ripped off knickers on the floor, against the door or try the desk …. now don’t feign disgust… now don’t pretend you wouldn’t.
I am a cheap chick, turn a trick, trip your wick, bother booted swift kick dancing down the fireman’s pole, digging deep into a hole.
Express train through the tunnel, danger spider web funnel.
Come hither don’t dither hurry up before it withers I cant wait all night are you looking for a fight….. I can do that too,especially for you. …. now don’t feign disgust… now don’t pretend you wouldn’t.

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 06:45:10

    Fantastic poem Willow. โค x


  2. Jane Dougherty
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 07:12:04

    Wow! This is good, Willow. I think it might be the best piece of yours I’ve read!


  3. Daniel Kemp
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 07:12:57

    I absolutely loved your opening verse. It said everything I needed to know about what this poem was going to be about. In today’s parlance (yes, I am that old-fashioned) —you nailed it! But I think the two other verses were overlong and because of that, you lost the cadence of the first verse. Nevertheless, you have admirable talent. Thank you for posting this.


    • willowdot21
      Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:45:11

      I agree this is a very old poem of mine that I decided to republish and what you say is bang on. Hopefully my writing has improved since then ๐Ÿ’œ


  4. jenanita01
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 07:15:07

    Ooohh… you wouldn’t, would you? (I think you would…)


  5. Ritu
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:04:33

    Wow, Sis!


  6. robertawrites235681907
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 08:37:49

    Wow, I am bowled over by this, Teagan. It is magnificent.


  7. ellenbest24
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 09:26:35

    Blooming Wow! Willow if you tweaked the length of a couple of verses this would be your best piece. At least the best I have read. The movement, the beat, took me along the verses at speed. Your pace is excellent. So pleased I came today.


  8. Dale
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:35:17

    Wow! Iโ€™m with Jane! This was fantastic!


  9. Ben Naga
    Jul 20, 2019 @ 14:46:22

    Nice piece. ๐Ÿ™‚


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