Drowning.

Drowning

Cold

Can’t breath

Lungs bursting

Pain exploding

Out of time and breath

Drowning I sink deeper

Darker ever the light recedes

I am trapped hopelessly in weeds

Held fast I silently breath my last

So sad, there’s nothing to flash before me.

A

Wasted

Pointless life

No one will miss

I leave not a mark

Unseen, unheard, undone

Wasted years lost on cold hearts

No songs for me, I was not free

Unloved, uncared for, useless, wasted

Lost from the beginning I could not see.

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    May 31, 2019 @ 19:44:16

    Never. You are never a wasted life sis. Believe me πŸ’œ

    Reply

  2. pensitivity101
    May 31, 2019 @ 19:52:09

    Wow. This packs a punch. Glad you can manage the feelings now. ❀

    Reply

  3. cordeliasmom2012
    May 31, 2019 @ 19:58:42

    No, Willow. You have made a mark, and have not wasted your life. Being able to write such a moving poem, which will be read by thousands of people all over the world, is just one small example of your value. I always look forward to hearing from you, and I’m sure many others do, too.

    Reply

  4. philosophermouseofthehedge
    May 31, 2019 @ 21:09:26

    β€œHeld fast I silently breath my last
    So sad, there’s nothing to flash before me.”
    Lines to make an one think.
    Well done

    Reply

  5. robertawrites235681907
    Jun 01, 2019 @ 06:28:17

    Oooh, this is terrific, Willow

    Reply

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