It’s the day after Valentine’s and all is fine
The chocolates are eaten and they’ve drank the wine.
The house is quiet there is no one in
Unlike yesterday’s unholy din.
The love had lasted an hour or two
Then the wine got them talking truths as you do
Tempers got fraught and they came to blows
He broke the plates and she cut up his clothes.
She stormed out and he locked the door.
She drove the car through the window to settle the score.
The lawn is in a real mess
Covered in tyre marks and signs of distress.
The bricky and glazer are rubbing their hands
There’s plenty of work for them which is just grand.
This evening he will be home bearing flowers
There might just be peace for a couple of hours.
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:10:13
This I found a little comical. The image I got in my head was entertaining. I donβt know if that was your intent but that is how I took it. It was great writing though.
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:16:15
I did write it with humour in mind , to get over a serious point. I am so glad you enjoyed it ππ
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:17:07
Iβm so glad you shared this. It helps bring humor to an otherwise mite serious topic.
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:19:06
Sometimes it spreads the word quicker π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:31:03
Indeed π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:58:06
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Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:13:09
Amazing how fast things can turn…. π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:13:46
Yes very true on a sixpence. π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:15:47
Don’t I know it π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 17:18:12
Yes me too π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 20:25:32
Sad but all to often true. Life isn’t always rosy. Gets you thinking….
Feb 15, 2019 @ 20:26:37
Yes it does, I tried to put some humour in but the message is a serious one π
Feb 16, 2019 @ 06:36:15
Sometimes my thoughts tend to go towards serious too. Itβs the light and the dark in me.
Feb 16, 2019 @ 06:39:28
Hi Marje we’ve said this before we does and we do seem to tend towards our dark side when writing ππ
Feb 15, 2019 @ 20:40:34
I love love love this!!! Haha!
Feb 15, 2019 @ 20:42:14
Thank you Kat π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 21:38:32
I would be very apprehensive about next year.
Feb 15, 2019 @ 21:49:44
Yes indeed π
Feb 15, 2019 @ 23:17:21
Oh dear, good poem.. x
Feb 16, 2019 @ 06:33:58
Thank you Marian π
Feb 16, 2019 @ 03:37:30
Great poem. The humour delivers a serious message and so apt about the fleeting love of Valentine’s Day which isn’t what the rest of the year is about. More sustainability required.
Well done and thanks for sharing.
Feb 16, 2019 @ 06:30:50
Thank you Debbie I was hoping the humour would help with the message. You have definitely got my message, thank you for reading and commenting π