Healer Willow Twirls

I wrote  this  little  ditty back in  2013. I was in a  bad place  ….it’s  so strange looking  back on  your  early  work. It obvious I  did not like myself very much  then.

Healer willow Twirls

 Whitewalls roll and swirl as willow heals

Will she ever escape from how it is, that others feel.

Lashes, slashes and wheals she hides them all from view

The stairwell whore  throws out swill she knows what to do.

Whitewalls  roll and swirl as willow heals

In the stairwell  the whore swills away her skills.

Wishing things better, never, never makes things so

willow is a healer, but she cannot heal willow

Whitewalls  roll and swirl as willow heals

Ills twirl  and swirl and woes beset the healer

Weeping  softly in the stairwell no one cares how the whore  feels

Sills  and trills the drowning healer willow the whore of the stairwell.

38 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Sue Vincent
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 15:43:55

    This is so sad, Willow. x


  2. Jordy
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 15:52:42

    Ahh, Willow. And it is great to see how much we grow. Big hugs to she in the stairwell. 💗


  3. Ritu
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 16:08:11

    Your words move me sis 😢💜


  4. Marje @ Kyrosmagica
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 17:08:34

    Powerful and full of sad emotion Willow. So glad you are now in a happier place. ❤ x


  5. Judy E Martin
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 18:47:13

    That was so very sad, Sis. It sounds like you were going through a dreadful time. I am glad that you managed to get out of that place into a happier one. 💖


  6. Kat Myrman
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 19:17:40

    Trusting you are in a better place now Willow. At least I hope so. Much love. ❤️💜❤️


  7. justmuddlingthroughlife
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 22:25:40

    A very sad poem, glad things are better now .


  8. antoniazen
    Feb 11, 2019 @ 13:05:05

    When climbing mountains it’s good to look back at how far you’ve traveled to get where you are. I’m so glad you love yourself more now … and I’m glad you expressed how you felt then.


  9. Betty Hayes Albright
    Feb 13, 2019 @ 21:52:22

    Willow, I’m glad you’re not in that “place” anymore. It’s hard, I know, having struggled with depression. Writing it out as you’ve done over the years is great therapy. Hugs to you 🤗💕


  10. noelleg44
    Feb 15, 2019 @ 14:00:36

    Lovely, Willow, sad but hopeful.


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