The Friday Reminder and Prompt for #SoCS Feb. 9/19

Our Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “ends with -ly.” Start your post with any adv\nerb that ends in “-ly.” Bonus points if you end with an adverb too. Have fun!

Part of LindaGHill’s #SoCs

Quietly, Softly

Quietly, softly they reached out to eachother. No one seemed to give them a second thought.

Huddled in the corner of a doorway trying to avoid the bitter wind and lashing rain.

People unwittingly passed by not giving the wet box in the corner of the doorway a second glance.

Finally a young man heard they soft plaintiff sound coming from the box and stopped.

Quietly he reached over and looked into the box. What he saw shocked him deeply. There were two of them, struggling to hold on to life. Two tiny little souls clinging on to life, clinging on to eachother.

Two tiny boys only a few hours old, covered in their mothers blood. The young man picked the two lost souls out of the box and wrapped them in his coat. He tapped 999 into his mobile.

The paramedics asked the young man if he wanted to go with them to A & E, he did willingly.

The tiny boys died an hour after they arrived still holding hands. They breathed their last together.

The young man cried softly, he didn’t know these tiny twins but he had wanted to save them.

On the other side of town she wept bitterly, scared and alone she prayed someone would find them. The pain had stopped now but she was still bleeding. So cold and alone, she died crying softly.

Three young lives gone in one night, twin babes and barely teenager gone harshly,sadly painfully.

29 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 06:14:22

    Oh my, sis! This was heartbreaking 😢💜

    Reply

  2. robertawrites235681907
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 06:55:21

    Oh, Willow, this is so very, very sad.

    Reply

  3. ksbeth
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 09:43:24

    so very sad

    Reply

  4. J-Dub
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 15:02:54

    Gripping. Heartbreaking. Gives me chills. Very nicely done.

    Reply

  5. dkatiepowellart
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 16:01:43

    Heartbreaking. Good writing, came out of ly…

    Reply

  6. msjadeli
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 16:02:23

    There’s a story swirling around these pour souls that needed to be told.

    Reply

  7. Maggie
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 17:40:13

    Heartbreakingly powerful.

    Reply

  8. antoniazen
    Feb 09, 2019 @ 18:25:58

    Ouch! This is beautifully written and oh so tragic. It is strange what the subconscious throws up in stream of consciousness writing. Possibly pain and/or deep concern for others has manifested into this.

    Reply

  9. Willowsoul
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 00:16:31

    Brilliant 🌺

    Reply

  10. LindaGHill
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 02:41:50

    Such tragedy. Beautifully written, my friend. ❤

    Reply

  11. Jami Carder
    Feb 10, 2019 @ 03:14:11

    3 children:(

    Reply

  12. Tandy | Lavender and Lime
    Feb 12, 2019 @ 17:14:30

    How tragic and I’m sure so true for many teenage mums.

    Reply

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