This is for Ronovanwrite’s Weekly Haiku Challenge.
So bitter my heart
Your sugar kisses cause pain
Sour torn apart.
04 Feb 2019 19 Comments
in Poems Tags: #239 Sugar&Bitter, #weekly Haiku, Broken hearted, Poetry Prompt Challenge, Ronovanwrites
This is for Ronovanwrite’s Weekly Haiku Challenge.
So bitter my heart
Your sugar kisses cause pain
Sour torn apart.
Salty like hot dogs (and tears). Sweet like marmalade (and life).
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Feb 04, 2019 @ 16:29:37
That image is stunning and so are the words you wrote to go with it.
Feb 04, 2019 @ 16:46:11
Thank you like this image it has inspired me more than once ππ
Feb 04, 2019 @ 16:56:22
Wonderful take sis π
Feb 04, 2019 @ 18:09:47
Thank you Sis π
Feb 04, 2019 @ 17:28:52
But hopefully not to the point that the bitterness cannot be sweetened once again…
Feb 04, 2019 @ 18:08:38
We live in hope π
Feb 04, 2019 @ 18:23:32
We must.π§‘
Feb 05, 2019 @ 00:23:14
Brilliant!β€οΈ
Feb 05, 2019 @ 06:09:33
Thank you π
Feb 05, 2019 @ 08:48:53
Beautiful words that capture the image perfectly. π
Feb 05, 2019 @ 09:22:23
Thank you Jo π
Feb 05, 2019 @ 10:39:06
Love the phrase ‘sour torn apart’. I love the image too, did you create it?
Feb 05, 2019 @ 10:48:37
No it’s a free image from pixabay https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://pixabay.com/en/woman-female-beauty-portrait-2314984/&ved=2ahUKEwjt2Zq-wqTgAhUUUBUIHSrsDPkQFjAAegQIARAB&usg=AOvVaw2559HIpZiC1d2st0xR5WH2
Feb 05, 2019 @ 10:51:09
well, it partners well with your words. Thanks for the link. π
Feb 05, 2019 @ 10:55:35
And Pixabay is free to use. I have used this image more than once it is a favourite big mine .
Feb 05, 2019 @ 10:56:30
It’s a great image!
Feb 05, 2019 @ 10:57:45
Very evocative π
Feb 05, 2019 @ 21:47:19
Bittersweet – always so hard to bear. ππ
Feb 05, 2019 @ 21:51:26
Yes truly so