Thursday Photo Prompt:#writephoto Hidden.

This is my entry for #writephoto for Sue Vincent‘s prompt.


Knows what

Lies beneath

The calm waters

Of this placid stream

Unseen currents forging

Ahead into the unknown

Belying the calm of above

Just as in life we forge on swan like

Thrashing madly underneath, feigning calm.

32 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Penny Wilson Writes
    Nov 22, 2018 @ 21:18:43

    Lovely! ❤


  2. Robert Matthew Goldstein
    Nov 22, 2018 @ 21:24:53

    Just beautiful. I heard the rhythm of gentle waves as I read it. The last two lines are profound.


  3. Ritu
    Nov 22, 2018 @ 21:34:11

    Very good sis 💜


  4. Dale
    Nov 22, 2018 @ 22:05:43

    Wonderful, Willow!
    (And funny, because my picture of running water was used for Friday Fictioneers yesterday…)


  5. Sue Vincent
    Nov 22, 2018 @ 23:18:59

    Yes… the feet are madly thrashing. Lovely, Willow ❤


  6. Hélène Vaillant
    Nov 22, 2018 @ 23:31:45

    Beautiful Willow. Your poem flows like a dance.


  7. anuragbakhshi
    Nov 23, 2018 @ 05:52:30

    So true!


  8. robbiesinspiration
    Nov 23, 2018 @ 16:28:16

    Very nice, Willow.


  9. Miriam Hurdle
    Nov 23, 2018 @ 23:48:51

    Beautiful Etheree, Willow, well done! ❤ ❤


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  11. Jordan
    Nov 25, 2018 @ 18:05:07

    Lovely, Willow!


  12. Bette A. Stevens
    Nov 25, 2018 @ 18:20:58

    Beautiful…and oh so true! ❤ xo


  13. Piglet in Portugal
    Nov 25, 2018 @ 20:59:00

    Love it! The etheree form is harder than it first appears,


  14. Betty Hayes Albright
    Nov 26, 2018 @ 10:49:09

    I love this, Willow! 💓💓


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