Thursday photo prompt: Fall #writephoto

This is my entry for Sue Vincent‘s Thursday Photo Prompt.

This week the prompt word to go with the photo is Fall.

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The Fall.

Her eyes snapped open, how did she come to be here. Taking a deep breath she fought the confusion in her mind to discover her last journey. As her breathing slowed she took in her surroundings.

This was a beautiful place, colours, sunlight and the soft splash of a waterfall. She looked down, it was, certainly a long drop with sharp rocks at the base.

In a flash memories of the last week flooded into her already overloaded brain. The fight, the pain, the banishment the overwhelming grief and guilt.

How had it started, she asked herself, immediately giving herself the answer, that the beginning was no longer important but how it was to end.

Suddenly the surroundings began to shift , they were coming she had to act now and quickly, no time to jump to another space or moment it had to end.

Closing her eyes she leaned forward into a fall. The last thing she felt was sunlight and water, the last sounds she heard were birds and the breeze.

She felt a thud, blackness and blissful peace.

20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Sep 29, 2018 @ 17:15:56

    This is touching sis πŸ’œ

    Reply

  2. Sue Vincent
    Sep 30, 2018 @ 16:59:40

    Poignant and intriguing, Willow. x

    Reply

  3. anuragbakhshi
    Oct 01, 2018 @ 05:00:12

    Oooh, we see how it ends, but not how it began.

    Reply

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  5. sarahsouthwest
    Oct 03, 2018 @ 08:20:27

    Poignant – but mysterious. What happened????

    Reply

    • willowdot21
      Oct 03, 2018 @ 08:40:28

      The plight of a fallen angel, pursued through space and time by anvenging archangels! Her only hope is to take a fall of faith and hope for death and possibly forgiveness.πŸ’œ

      Reply

  6. D. Wallace Peach
    Oct 03, 2018 @ 18:56:59

    So intense and heartbreaking, but also full of mystery. I read your response to Sarah. I hope the angel find her peace and forgiveness. πŸ™‚

    Reply

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  8. augustokello
    Oct 04, 2018 @ 13:52:33

    This is lovely Sue

    Reply

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