For the month of September I am going to choose a piece of music or song and write a poem or alternative version. Jane Dougherty is doing a September Stanza here. And Kat Myrman is doing September a poem a day Here.
Today’s piece of Music is The Whole of the Moon. By The Waterboys.
My interpretation
You have have eyes that see
Life in all its glory
In the shadow the view eludes me
I have only half the story
Grabbing life you take it and it grows
I am wading through the mire
You float where the river flows
Like you I was once on fire
Life a thing to be won
Keep as you are my son .
Sep 22, 2018 @ 06:59:18
Love this sis 😍😍
Sep 22, 2018 @ 07:00:42
Brilliant song isn’t it 💜
Sep 22, 2018 @ 07:29:15
It is indeed!
Sep 22, 2018 @ 08:00:37
💜
Sep 22, 2018 @ 09:51:09
I think I like the name of the Waterboys as much as their music 🙂 Lovely.
Sep 22, 2018 @ 07:59:29
Brilliant group brilliant song, I always find it so inspiring!
Sep 22, 2018 @ 08:18:19
🙂
Sep 22, 2018 @ 13:06:11
Beautiful
Sep 22, 2018 @ 14:02:21
Thank you, I do like the Waterboys
Sep 22, 2018 @ 16:33:51
Do drop by my site!
I write short fiction:)
Sep 22, 2018 @ 17:44:17
I will do 💜
Sep 22, 2018 @ 14:18:55
Didn’t know this song or group! Lovely indeed.
Sep 22, 2018 @ 14:32:33
You have got to love a pure Celtic group! What words he writes, he knocks me and my words into a corner. I love this song it reminds me of my eldest son 💜
Sep 22, 2018 @ 15:05:53
I’ll have to re-listen to it properly!
Sep 22, 2018 @ 15:40:45
I think you will like it 💜 please let me know what you think 💜
Sep 22, 2018 @ 15:42:22
Will do!
Sep 22, 2018 @ 15:43:56
🤗😀
Sep 22, 2018 @ 16:38:48
OK… Now that I have listened to the song properly, I can truly appreciate your poem. Lovely interpretation! I’m a “whole of a moon” kinda gal myself…
Sep 22, 2018 @ 17:43:56
I am glad to hear that I thought you must be😀 it’s a wonderful song isn’t it 💜
Sep 22, 2018 @ 15:58:44
Lovely!
Sep 22, 2018 @ 17:47:32
Thank you 💜 I do love the waterboys 💜