September Music 1

For the month of September I am going to choose a piece of music or song and write a poem or alternative version. Jane Dougherty is doing a September Stanza here. And Kat Myrman is doing September a poem a day Here

Day One Lacrimosa by Mozart.

Tears Tanka.

Tears fall , I am lost

The angel weeps tears of stone

Judgement day dawns cold

The good and the bad are judged

Tears fall on the young and old.

18 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 21:30:37

    Beautiful, sis ❤


  2. Miriam Hurdle
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 23:53:53

    They both are angelic, the poem and the music! I love Mozart!


  3. roughwighting
    Sep 02, 2018 @ 11:10:25

    Beautiful, sad tanka. As I read it, I’m listening to Sinfonia in D by Giovanni Porta which at times also makes me think of angels weeping tears of stone, yet then the joy joins in, and life is blessed again. The Mozart piece is sublime, your poem a perfect match.


  4. Jane Dougherty
    Sep 02, 2018 @ 12:00:39

    The Requiem is one of my favourite pieces of music! Lovely!


  5. Betty Hayes Albright
    Sep 03, 2018 @ 03:02:43

    Love both your poem and the beautiful Mozart piece! ❤️❤️


  6. Dale
    Sep 03, 2018 @ 03:31:18

    Perfect tanka with my favourite part of Mozart’s Requiem


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