Stream of Consciousness Saturday. 1/09/2018.

31 Aug 2018 24 Comments

by willowdot21 in Poems Tags: Acrostic, LindaGHill, overflow, Polar Bears, Round, Stream of Consciousness Saturday, Surrounds

For this week’s #SoCs LindaGHill said: Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “round.” Use it as a word by itself or find a word that contains it. Bonus points if you start and/or finish your post with it. Have fun!:

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Surrounds Acrostic.

Surrounded by clear blue ice water

Undercurrents pulling you out

Ruled by the changing climates

Receeding, the ice flows

Only make things worse

Unsafe for you

Now you starve

Drifting

Solo.

24 Comments (+add yours?)

Ritu
Sep 01, 2018 @ 05:45:44

Great job sis!!!
What are you going to do this month??

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- willowdot21
  Sep 01, 2018 @ 06:00:46
  
  Thank you Ritu, I don’t know yet no one has said 💜 sleep a little if I am lucky maybe 💜💜💜
  
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  - Ritu
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 08:07:34
    
    Take a breather, and let whatever comes out of you be your poetic guide!
  - willowdot21
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 07:14:20
    
    Will do Sis, as long as it is printable 💜💜
  - Ritu
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 07:17:21
    
    😘
robbiesinspiration
Sep 01, 2018 @ 07:28:04

This is incredible, Willow. You should link your blog to twitter and then we can share you amazing stuff there for you.

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- willowdot21
  Sep 01, 2018 @ 07:57:05
  
  I know Robbie but I do find Twitter a little scary. It sounds silly but with wordpress, Twitter and Facebook I sometimes get very overwhelmed. I am amazed by people like you and Ritu who ,have high powered jobs, children, homes to run, write books, Twitter, blog and Facebook 😱😱😱💜💜💜💜
  
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  - robbiesinspiration
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 08:17:54
    
    Ok, I do understand that. Hugs.
  - willowdot21
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 08:18:35
    
    💜💜💜💜
Claire Saul (PainPalsBlog)
Sep 01, 2018 @ 10:44:56

Sooo good, Willow! I wonder if they still teach this type of poetry writing in schools? Sharing this fab poem!! xxx

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- willowdot21
  Sep 01, 2018 @ 10:50:43
  
  Thank you Claire, I love all types of poetry but the Acrostic is one of my favourites. I hope poetry in all its forms is still taught. Thank you for sharing. Hope you are well today 💜💝
  
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  - Claire Saul (PainPalsBlog)
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 10:53:41
    
    Pretty good – venturing out with some old school friends for a pub lunch!
  - willowdot21
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 12:32:38
    
    Excellent do enjoy 😉😉
Jane Dougherty
Sep 01, 2018 @ 18:26:06

This makes me think of a polar bear drifting on an ice flow.

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- willowdot21
  Sep 01, 2018 @ 19:56:52
  
  That is exactly what it is about, well spotted 💜💜
  
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  - Jane Dougherty
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 19:58:14
    
    Those images of polar bears are tragic.
  - willowdot21
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 20:08:18
    
    They break my 💓
  - Jane Dougherty
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 20:16:35
    
    Me too.
  - willowdot21
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 20:25:24
    
    💜💜
Miriam Hurdle
Sep 01, 2018 @ 18:46:21

A wonderful acrostic poem, Willow. I love the form and I should write more.

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- willowdot21
  Sep 01, 2018 @ 19:48:58
  
  Acrostic is one of my favourite types of poem💜💜
  
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  - Miriam Hurdle
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 20:27:49
    
    Yes, it’s fun to do and the words come out quickly by the prompting of the letters. ❤ ❤
  - willowdot21
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 20:31:25
    
    I really enjoy them 💜
  - Miriam Hurdle
    Sep 01, 2018 @ 20:38:09
    
    Yes, it’s a good form. ❤