It is August and so Jane is doing : a chain of images each one suggested by the last word in the preceding poem. They’ll be short, a single image of just a few lines. It will be interesting to see where it ends up by the end of the month.
Kat will be doing short 3,4, or 5 line poems no syllable counts of rhymes, starting with the word ‘August’ on the first day. The last word of the poem will be the first word of day two’s poem, and so on until the end of the month.
Finally I shall be doing all types of poetry but each poem will start with the last word in the preceding poem.
Todays poem is a Ballade.
This angst is here to stay.
Blind to all that is kind
Deaf to all that’s tuneful
Dumb, can’t speak your mind.
Untouched by all that’s soulful.
You are lost, completely without hope
Struggling on from day today
You need to learn to cope
This angst is here to stay.
———-
You have to grow you need to mature
To blossom and to flower
So you can be strong and endure
We rely on you to reach out and take the power.
Take on this mantle you’ve been given
So struggle on from day to day
To fail will not be forgiven
This angst is here to stay.
———
So are you ready for the task
Your whole life has readied you for this
Open you eyes remove the mask
To clear your senses from the mist
You have help, you cannot resist.
Struggling on from day to day
Pointless to persist
This angst is here to stay.
——–
Are you still deaf and blind
Struggling from day to day
Your fate cannot be refined
This angst will not go away
——-
Aug 19, 2018 @ 12:33:02
I really love this Sis💜
Aug 19, 2018 @ 13:26:57
Thank you Sis 💜💜
Aug 19, 2018 @ 14:39:03
You are amazing.
Aug 19, 2018 @ 16:04:31
Thank you Dale 💜
Aug 19, 2018 @ 16:37:49
Oh dear, that is a sorrowful one 🙂
Aug 20, 2018 @ 13:50:06
Powerful words, Willow, and shedding the mask isn’t easy…💗
Aug 20, 2018 @ 13:54:48
That’s very true , often it is the hardest thing but often after we do we realize we should of done it years ago! 😊
Aug 21, 2018 @ 03:41:10
Beautiful, Willow! So lyrical, I can almost hear it being sung. 💖💕🎶
Aug 21, 2018 @ 04:16:04
I enjoyed writing this one Betty the repetition in it was very comforting.💜
Aug 21, 2018 @ 19:11:02
There is something soothing about meter…. both the reading and the writing of it. Pretty soon I start thinking in iambic pentameter. (Then it’s time to take a break. 😄)
Hope you’ve had a good day, Willow. ❤️❤️
Aug 21, 2018 @ 19:14:41
Thank you Betty I am glad you enjoyed reading this , I was hoping this would sound like a song .💜💜
Aug 21, 2018 @ 19:39:58
It definitely does! ❤️❤️
Aug 21, 2018 @ 19:55:02
💜💜💜