It is August and so Jane is doing : a chain of images each one suggested by the last word in the preceding poem. They’ll be short, a single image of just a few lines. It will be interesting to see where it ends up by the end of the month.
Kat will be doing short 3,4, or 5 line poems no syllable counts of rhymes, starting with the word ‘August’ on the first day. The last word of the poem will be the first word of day two’s poem, and so on until the end of the month.
Finally I shall be doing all types of poetry but each poem will start with the last word in the preceding poem.
Today’s poem is a Triolet
Upon.
Upon who’s orders are we bound,upon who’s doors for answers pound.
Are we so lost, never to find our way.
Have we no emotions left, lost today.
Upon who’s orders are we bound,upon who’s doors for answers pound.
That sweet innocence in life we slay.
Manon is God, see good die, fall away.
Upon who’s orders are we bound,upon who’s doors for answers pound.
No hope left for us, the end’s here, all’s dust.
Aug 09, 2018 @ 08:34:37
That’s what it feel like.
Aug 09, 2018 @ 08:35:40
Slipping off to hell in a handcart as my mum would of said 💜💜
Aug 09, 2018 @ 11:31:23
🙂
Aug 09, 2018 @ 08:39:51
Oh gloom!!!!!
Aug 09, 2018 @ 08:54:26
Gloom, gloom we are all doomed 💜💜
Aug 09, 2018 @ 09:12:19
Eek!
Aug 09, 2018 @ 09:32:33
😀😀😀😀💜💜💜
Aug 09, 2018 @ 22:19:23
This one makes me think Willow. Upon who’s orders indeed! ❤️❤️❤️
Aug 09, 2018 @ 22:35:26
Gloomy, yes, but well-crafted and engaging! I really like this, Willow. 🤗❤️❤️❤️
Aug 10, 2018 @ 04:44:01
I like this one too Betty and I am enjoying trying out the different types of poetry. 💜
Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:46:44
And you have a gift for it! 🤗❤️
Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:48:40
Thank you Betty that’s very kind of you to say💜 is that’s new photo 💜
Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:53:42
Yes, new photo. My hubby just took it. I got tired of the other one. 😆
Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:54:27
It is really lovely 💜💜
Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:57:55
Thank you, that’s kind of you to say. 😊 💕 I never like pics of me. 🤓
Aug 10, 2018 @ 19:59:35
No of us do, do we but this onr is lovely 💜💜
Aug 10, 2018 @ 20:02:02
Aww, thank you again, Willow. ❤️❤️❤️
How’re you doing….is the weather still hot there?
Aug 10, 2018 @ 20:02:46
💜💜
Aug 10, 2018 @ 20:05:11
❤️💕💞❤️😊
Aug 10, 2018 @ 22:05:51
💜💜💜
Aug 10, 2018 @ 12:32:37
This is very good, Willow. I liked it a lot.
Aug 10, 2018 @ 12:41:35
Thank you Robbie, it is a complicated disapline but it seems to work 💜