Lune Day 14

15 Jun 2018 14 Comments

by willowdot21 in Poems Tags: , , ,

At Kat Myrman‘s suggestion,along with Jane Dougherty, I’m trying out the Lune form this month. The Lune is a three line poem, either 5/3/5 syllables or 3/5/3 words.

Too much water flows

Like lost dreams

Lost where? No one knows.

14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Ritu
    Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:15:50

    Thought provoking 💜

    Reply

  2. ksbeth
    Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:40:57

    beautiful and i love this form –

    Reply

  3. Lynz Real Cooking
    Jun 15, 2018 @ 16:45:01

    lovely

    Reply

  4. Jane Dougherty
    Jun 15, 2018 @ 18:59:22

    Nice one, Willow. I like this.

    Reply

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