At Kat Myrman‘s suggestion,along with Jane Dougherty, I’m trying out the Lune form this month. The Lune is a three line poem, either 5/3/5 syllables or 3/5/3 words.
Too much water flows
Like lost dreams
Lost where? No one knows.
15 Jun 2018 14 Comments
in Poems Tags: dreams, hopes, lost, Lune Day 14
At Kat Myrman‘s suggestion,along with Jane Dougherty, I’m trying out the Lune form this month. The Lune is a three line poem, either 5/3/5 syllables or 3/5/3 words.
Too much water flows
Like lost dreams
Lost where? No one knows.
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Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:15:50
Thought provoking π
Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:16:24
Thank you Sis, how are you πππ
Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:27:07
I’m good sis… Chugging along waiting for the weekend!
Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:31:54
I am glad to hear that keep resting when you can , have a great weekend ππππ
Jun 15, 2018 @ 11:34:32
You too sis πππ
Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:35:27
ππ
Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:40:57
beautiful and i love this form –
Jun 15, 2018 @ 10:55:50
Thank you ππΉ
Jun 15, 2018 @ 16:45:01
lovely
Jun 15, 2018 @ 16:47:35
Thank you Sis did
Jun 15, 2018 @ 16:47:40
ππ
Jun 15, 2018 @ 18:59:22
Nice one, Willow. I like this.
Jun 15, 2018 @ 19:00:00
I like this one too.π
Jun 15, 2018 @ 21:01:59
Itβs a good one.