Lune Day Ten Excluded

At Kat Myrman‘s suggestion,along with Jane Dougherty, I’m trying out the Lune form this month. The Lune is a three line poem, either 5/3/5 syllables or 3/5/3 words.

Shut out completely

Excluded

It hurts so deeply

21 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Betty Hayes Albright
    Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:06:27

    Sending a hug! ❀️

    Reply

  2. Ritu
    Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:45:10

    (((hugs))) πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

    Reply

  3. Lynz Real Cooking
    Jun 10, 2018 @ 21:28:32

    hugs to you dear sister xxx

    Reply

  4. Jane Dougherty
    Jun 11, 2018 @ 07:54:53

    More hugs coming, Willow πŸ™‚

    Reply

  5. janmalique
    Jun 11, 2018 @ 20:56:45

    Those few words convey so much pain and emotion. Sending Winnie the Pooh round with hugs and hunny.

    Reply

  6. Audrey Dawn - Oldest Daughter Redheaded Sister
    Jun 12, 2018 @ 01:49:11

    Sending you light and love, my friend. This one hurts.. hugs.

    Reply

  7. Kat Myrman
    Jun 14, 2018 @ 22:57:09

    Oh my. I can so relate to this Willow. It hurts so deeply. Hugs my friend.

    Reply

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