At Kat Myrman‘s suggestion,along with Jane Dougherty, I’m trying out the Lune form this month. The Lune is a three line poem, either 5/3/5 syllables or 3/5/3 words.
Shut out completely
Excluded
It hurts so deeply
10 Jun 2018 21 Comments
in Poems Tags: excluded, Kat Myrman, Lune Day Ten
At Kat Myrman‘s suggestion,along with Jane Dougherty, I’m trying out the Lune form this month. The Lune is a three line poem, either 5/3/5 syllables or 3/5/3 words.
Shut out completely
Excluded
It hurts so deeply
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Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:06:27
Sending a hug! ❤️
Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:07:07
Thank you it’s much needed 💜💜
Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:23:50
💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞
Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:45:10
(((hugs))) 💜💜💜
Jun 10, 2018 @ 19:57:02
💜💜💜
Jun 10, 2018 @ 21:28:32
hugs to you dear sister xxx
Jun 10, 2018 @ 21:41:32
Thank you Sis 💜💜
Jun 11, 2018 @ 17:53:28
Most welcome ❤️
Jun 11, 2018 @ 07:54:53
More hugs coming, Willow 🙂
Jun 11, 2018 @ 09:00:42
Thanks the more the better thanks 💜💜
Jun 11, 2018 @ 11:10:38
🙂
Jun 11, 2018 @ 20:56:45
Those few words convey so much pain and emotion. Sending Winnie the Pooh round with hugs and hunny.
Jun 11, 2018 @ 19:59:16
Winnie, honest, just who this Eeyore needs! 💜
Jun 11, 2018 @ 20:17:14
Rights! He’s coming as fast as his little legs can walk.
Jun 11, 2018 @ 20:21:00
Thank you so much 💜💜
Jun 11, 2018 @ 21:20:01
My pleasure. 💜💜
Jun 12, 2018 @ 06:58:07
😊💜
Jun 12, 2018 @ 01:49:11
Sending you light and love, my friend. This one hurts.. hugs.
Jun 12, 2018 @ 06:57:38
Thanks Sis, how are you thank you for the light and love 💜💜
Jun 14, 2018 @ 22:57:09
Oh my. I can so relate to this Willow. It hurts so deeply. Hugs my friend.
Jun 15, 2018 @ 05:54:26
Yes Kat a sad situation to be in 💜💜