This week for Colleen’s weekly poetry challenge we have the words Dance and Command. The twist is we have to use synonyms.
First I did a Senryu about relationship.
Like a doll she twirls
He thinks it’s to his orders
No, she pulls his strings
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And then a Haiku.
Snowdrops, Crocuses
Perform annual ballet
As young Spring decrees.
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Finally a Tanka.
A fatal tango
I trip the light fantastic
My inner voice screams no
I do his bidding blindly
Yet still I get it all wrong.